Chaos Theory: Chapter 2

Dec 20, 2007 22:36


The plot bunnies finally woke up. And then took this in a completely different direction than my muse had started planning. But what can you do? If Monty Python's taught us nothing (aside from how not to be seen, which is one of my all-time favorite sketches), it's that bunnies can be vicious. So enjoy! And happy holidays, all!

Hatred

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shikabane_mai December 21 2007, 04:16:20 UTC
First of all: Love your icon! So Huddy and Christmast-y! :D

“Now, you listen to me-just because a woman is a healthy size and not obnoxiously thin like some people, doesn’t mean-”
Heehee, I loved this line for some reason. It's just so typical.

The only thought that formed as she lost herself in blue (or at least the only one she would give any weight) was that whatever he said next should have her cringing. “You been tested?”
My favourite line that had me laughing like crazy! Although I also loved Cuddy's smart line about Chlamydia, aka hookers. ;)

And now I really, really comment on something I've been dying to say and keep forgetting: HOW THE HECK DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE AMAZING METAPHORS FOR EVERYTHING?!?!?! THERE! I said it. >:)

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alias424 December 21 2007, 14:41:26 UTC
Isn't that icon great? It's all tate4ever. She had some really great wintry ones in her last batch.

Haha! Glad you got that off your chest. ;) I really have no idea. My brain just works that way, linking other words and images to everything. Which is kind of annoying, actually, because there are probably ways it could've been wired that would be much more useful in everyday life. But you get what you get, I guess, and I should probably just be thankful when my brain decides to work at all, lol.

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gidget_zb December 21 2007, 07:09:28 UTC
Oh I loved it. Loved so much of it I'm going to like, quote every.single. line. And you'll like it.

“You’re ruining the moment.”

LOVE THIS. No idea why - juts love the image of him all up in her (rear) grill, telling her she's ruining the moment!

But there were days when Cuddy would swear that if it weren’t for the sometimes silent seconds he spent ogling her cleavage, she’d never get a word in edgewise.

HEE! And so so true.

She held the baby in one hand, the toddler’s wrist in the other, her commanding bark (almost) stopping the children in their tracks.

And I LOVED this just because of the (almost). God so true - as a mother you can be TERRIFYING but your kids just aren't quite scared of you enough.

There was a line, so faded from his repeated jaunts over it that it might as well have been etched in chalk to disappear with the rain and be scrawled back at random, a little farther from the rules each time.I'm adding jaunt to the favorite word list - because, it is awesome. And I love this whole section ( ... )

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alias424 December 21 2007, 14:47:42 UTC
Like you quoting lines is a threat. Ha! And you just had to use the cute little (threatening) bunny icon for this, didn't you? The plot bunnies drive me insane (and they know it). They all gang up on me, then start taking sides against each other, and each one wants to go in a different direction and just will not take no for an answer. I've had to kill many of them off just so that they'd stop trying to strangle the other ones--I'm sure they'd be thrilled to be called blood-thirsty.

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ashley_west December 21 2007, 10:37:01 UTC
YAY! Update! More soon? And because Wilson was nowhere in sight, can we conclude the speaker at the end of last chap. was Brenda?

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alias424 December 21 2007, 14:50:12 UTC
Don't worry--that'll come up later. Since we were following Cuddy around this time and she didn't see that part of the action, I couldn't work it in here (though I tried). But that voice will come back to haunt House again.

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ashley_west December 21 2007, 23:24:50 UTC
Ooh, promises of moar! me likey. the idea of a voice haunting House makes me all giggly for some reason, heh.

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vickysg1 December 21 2007, 12:32:13 UTC
Oh I love that! Can't wait for more!!!

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alias424 December 21 2007, 14:50:47 UTC
Thanks so much!

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elliejgirl December 21 2007, 15:08:15 UTC
Hee. Bunnies are vicious and evil.

I love how you have Cuddy trying to hate House, but not quite able to. :-D

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alias424 December 22 2007, 03:36:54 UTC
What a FABULOUS icon! *tries not to avert eyes*

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elliejgirl December 22 2007, 14:44:27 UTC
LOL. I had to use it when you made the Monty Python comment.

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