Fic: Chaos Theory

[alias424]

Because I miss watching new House episodes. And the clinic patients. And I'm really starting to wonder what the hell I did in my free time before I started writing Huddy fic...

Annoyance

“Here, here, and here, and here, and sometimes… here.”

Each spot was punctuated with a jab to an entirely different part of the body: head, chest, stomach, left

Comments

[phineas_gatsby]

You can stop here if you don't want to continue, but it's very cute and I'd love to hear more. Loved the kid latching onto Cuddy's breast (note to Mom: when they're old enough to bite, it's time to wean them)...and lol at the other kid. As a woman who lives, technically, in New Jersey (well, I vote there, at least), I am officially afraid.

Well done :)

[alias424]

It's probably sad that the insane fangirl in me would be flailing if I lived (or voted, which totally counts) in the same state as House.
And don't worry--you should still have a few years before Tough Guy becomes a serious threat. ;)

[phineas_gatsby]

Haha, good.

And, yes, all we Jersey girls love House...especially that quotation from Human Error: "Is this Heaven?" "No, this is New Jersey." And I've been to Princeton plenty of times--it's only about 40 minutes south of me--but since I got into the show this past summer, it was funny driving down to DC for move-in...the insane fangirl in ME was going "This is where House lives!"

[shikabane_mai]

At least I've got this fic (and Prism) to look forward to, now that we have to wait until January for new episodes. *sigh*

Stop here? Are you kidding? No way! I loved the part when Cuddy had the baby in her arm and how she was comforting the baby absentmindedly. It's so cute, seeing her with babies. :)

Hehe, I laughed at the end, even though I have no idea who it is that said that line of dialogue. Does that count as stupid? I hope the person was meant to be a mystery, or else I feel like an idiot not knowing. Lol.

Anyway: I can't wait till you update again! I'm so happy you're writing another Huddy fic!

[alias424]

Mmmm. Prism. I am so in love with the whole Perverse-verse that it's not even funny.

Yep. Definitely meant to be a mystery. I haven't quite decided yet whether I should clear it up or not (and by "I," I clearly mean my muse. lol) -- so for now, at least, pick your person. ;)

And thanks so much! It's always great to hear from you!

[logophobia12]

Oh yeah, I agree with everyone else so far - you have to keep this going! I feel all deprived - there isn't a whole lot of Huddy fics that I like a lotlately. It'll be this and Prism. (I love you guys ;))

Loved the last line! I laughed out loud a bunch during this. Nurse Brenda! The Screamer! Hee.

[alias424]

Aww, thanks. :) And Gidget and Prism are definitely made of so much awesome it should be illegal (but I'm so glad it isn't).

[goddesspharo]

This was great because it included all the makings of a good episode: clinic duty - check; House interacting with kids - check; a little sexual harassment before lunch - check. Fabulous job!

[alias424]

Ha! Who doesn't need a little House/Cuddy sexual harrassment before lunch? Thanks!

[nitsa_maro]

I love your stories,hope there is more :)

[alias424]

I was toying with the idea of leaving this here, but I think I've discovered some direction for it. With any luck, there'll be more soon. :)