LJ F&R 11: Innocuous...

[alexpgp]

The story so far:

Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5| Part 6 | Part 7 | Part 8I was careless as I turned the corner and so I ran almost directly into Finch and Ellmore, who were coming my way. My heart stopped for several moments, for I fully expected Malon's goons to recognize me. Ellmore, after all, had kept me immobile for several

Comments

[eternal_ot]

Well..well..I wished there was more..keeping people interested for so many weeks is indeed a commendable job..:) Great Going!

[alexpgp]

Thanks!

[murielle]

So glad to see Fremd, again!

The story continues to unravel, and I am as enthralled as I was in the beginning. :-)

[alexpgp]

Good to hear.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Cheers...

[whipchick]

Another edge of the seat installment! I'm curious, are you heading for a whole book after Idol?

[alexpgp]

I will confess, the thought had crossed my mind.

Do you think it would work?

Cheers...

[bleodswean]

This is one of the stronger entries in your 'verse. You really know this character and you have such a knack for action. What would otherwise be a filler scene....you flesh out completely with all the right details and dialogue. Well done for a man who was blinded by medicine!

[alexpgp]

Thanks for the kind words.

Cheers...

[sinnamongirl]

You're doing so awesome on incorporating the prompts into this story, and keeping us on the edge of our seats for so long! Good job!

[alexpgp]

I hope to be able to continue this for as long as is necessary (or possible).

Thanks for the comment!

Cheers...