I really enjoy the shape of this poem. I mean, I like the imagery, the colour too, but I have just sat back to enjoy the movement of the written word, and I like it.
Oh, you are bringing me such joy this season! I want to relish in this poem for days. I love the trick of poetry, simplicity which can offer the densest sustenance. There are so many lush layers to sink into.
Joy must be reciprocal, because your work has been having the same effect on me! I couldn't agree more with you, on one of poetry's neatest tricks being, the dense compacting of expansiveness. I suppose it's similar even to the genetic material of life itself, or perhaps like as Blake said. ". . .a World in a Grain of Sand. . . Infinity in the palm of your hand. . ."
I agree that the movement of your poem was beautiful. It added to the flow of the writing and made everything seem to sway with your descriptions. Very lovely.
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I'm glad you found it enjoyable to the eye.
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I couldn't agree more with you, on one of poetry's neatest tricks being, the dense compacting of expansiveness. I suppose it's similar even to the genetic material of life itself, or perhaps like as Blake said. ". . .a World in a Grain of Sand. . . Infinity in the palm of your hand. . ."
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Thank you!
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