Fic: "Breaking Point" PG-13 (16/?) [SB/VM, IM/CP, (OB/KU)]

May 21, 2008 11:16

Summery: Unbeknown to everyone, even Viggo himself, Viggo’s dormant Dissociative Identity Disorder (DID) surfaces, making Sean become caught between the real Viggo’s pure love and his Alter’s dark and twisted sense of love in a dangerous relationship that could destroy them both. The other cast members end up becoming caught in Viggo’s battle as ( Read more... )

breaking point, sb/vm

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makamu May 21 2008, 17:56:20 UTC
I have no reason to be mad at you for the Karl/Orlando thing; rather, I am very happy about it, because I think it fits them and the story quite well.

And lots of Ian is always a good thing in this story, although I fear he and his team of rescuers have a serious problem from my vantage point (as a reader I speak from a privileged position, of course.):

They might potentially make things ten times worse for Viggo and Sean both. Because, remembering that the Alter was created to protect Viggo, he just might feel it necessary to attack now, ere Viggo's angel can leave, and, in the Alter's logic, betray them both... *frets*

This story is very interesting and please don't leave me hanging...

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alexabond June 18 2008, 09:25:33 UTC
Thanks so much for your ever kind and faithful FB. Sorry I reply so late but some things in my rl came up and have kept me busy. 'sighs'

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the Karl and Orlando angle. I think I will try and work more on it in the next chapter.

Yes, things won't be simply just because Sean has finally left.

Thanks so much again for the kind FB. I will try and work on getting a new chapter out within a few weeks. 'many hugs'

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alexabond June 18 2008, 09:27:47 UTC
Thanks so much for your amazing and kind FB. Sorry I reply so late but some things in my RL came up and have kept me busy. 'sighs'

I am so sad to hear your life is hard on you. What is wrong? Can I do anything to help? 'tight embrace'

I'm happy to hear you liked the Karl and Orlando connection. I will try and work more on it in the next chapter.

Thanks so much again for your faithful FB. I will try and work on getting a new chapter out within a few weeks. 'many hugs'

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mistry89 May 22 2008, 07:05:31 UTC
Yes! Good Stuff is beginning to happen for Sean and Karl.
Thank you :)
*fingers crossed*

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alexabond June 18 2008, 09:28:59 UTC
Thanks so much for your sweet FB. Sorry I reply so late but some things in my RL came up and have kept me busy. 'sighs'

I'm glad to hear you like the Orlando and Karl connection; I was afraid everyone who followed this fic only did so in hopes Orlando would end up with Sean...

Thanks so much again. I will try and work on getting a new chapter out within a few weeks. 'many hugs'

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alexabond June 18 2008, 09:29:48 UTC
'deep blush' You flatter me. Thank you! 'tight embrace'

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sparkedbylore August 13 2008, 17:44:42 UTC
I can't believe I didn't comment. I really enjoy this series and thank you for sticking with it. There are so many different characters to take care of when you write this one, it exhausts me to read it. But, I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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alexabond August 13 2008, 18:42:41 UTC
Thanks so much. 'warm embrace' It means a lot to me to hear that. I haven't given up on this fic and as soon as my real life settles down I will go back to work on the next part.

Thanks so much again. It is kind comments like yours that keep me writing. 'hugs'

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