Comments | alexa31: Colour-Blind (Chen/Baekhyun)

alexa31

Colour-Blind (Chen/Baekhyun)

Mar 11, 2016 20:55

Title: Colour-Blind
Rating: PG-15
Warnings: None
Length: 4646
Summary: Waiting for that catalyst to come along and make you feel something more, Baekhyun still saw grey. (Soulmate au)
A/N: Originally posted at daelightsaving

( For whatever reason, there is a reason. )

member: chen, member: xiumin, member: baekhyun, pairing: xiuhan, member: luhan, length: oneshot, pairing: chenbaek

Comments 9

atheend March 11 2016, 19:05:56 UTC

Such a heartfelt and heartwarming Baekchen!!!! Love it!!!!

alexa31 March 15 2016, 06:54:47 UTC

Thank you for reading!

charliebnim March 12 2016, 03:16:15 UTC

So cute !!!!!!****

alexa31 March 15 2016, 06:54:56 UTC

Thank you ^^

fixedstar0328 March 12 2016, 17:59:58 UTC

auwww this fic is so beautiful ;__;

alexa31 March 15 2016, 06:55:16 UTC

Thanks for reading!

kyungfrosty June 26 2016, 17:33:45 UTC

ngYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH IM SUPPOSED TO BE DING MY COMMERCE PROJECT BUT HERE I AM CRYING OVER POETIC PROSE WHICH RIVALS ALL THE TEN POEMS IN MY ENGLISH TEXTBOOK IN THEIR BEAUTY AND IN THE EFFECTIVENESS OF THEIR IMAGERY

but seriously tho
your writing is where i've encountered the 2nd most powerful imagery. the most powerful imagery is india's national anthem. and yours is a rather close second. dammit u almost made me question my love for my country

this prose made me see through baekhyun's eyes and the transformation of baekhyun's character as his vision changed was just OMG LET ME CRY FOR A SEC IM SO HAPPY FOR BAEKHYUN NGAHAHAHAHAHAHAH //CUE UGLY SOBBING

alexa31 June 28 2016, 05:41:29 UTC

Ohmygosh, another one!

I made you question your love for your country O.O

Wow, thank you so much for reading! I am so happy I could affect you like this!! And I'm glad you kinda went on an emotional rollercoaster!

And yes, I never thought I'd write insecure Baek, but I did, and I am glad I did. I enjoyed it!

Once again, thank you for reading, and commenting! (Your comment is AWESOME!)

felineminseok7 December 28 2017, 18:16:34 UTC

AHHHHHHHH! /screams for 7 hours. I usually get bored if there's too much narration and less dialogues but your writing is so beautiful (probably more beautiful than Xiuhan's feelings when they realized Baek was seeing orange on Minseok's tie.) so I didn't get bored and got so satisfied ahhhhh. LOVED your writing style! I'm glad the angst didn't stretch out too much or I would've gotten too heart broken and wouldn't have finished reading it fkslask. Baek being smitten by Jongdae's strange eyebrows and beautiful smiles and loud laugh--RELATABLE. I'm an absolute Xiuhan trash too so that's a plus; Luhan only appeared in the fic for like 2 seconds but from that I already knew that--as usual, he's smitten for the tiny hamster man [insert pic of me pretending to be shocked]. This was amazing, thank you for writing!!!❤❤