But words can never harm me

[hubschrauber]

In the mirror, her pink mouth runs away from her. Features animated, the lifeblood of fear because I’m in love with you is not I love you. Five words cut to three and bleeding, the declarative sentence of damnation. Eyes sparkle like the ocean that drowned her. A killing weight lifted while she collapsed. Mother made memory and she is glad.
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Comments

[rhcastaway]

Ooh, this was very poetic. Lovely, really. I can't even pick out a line because I can't choose between so many good ones. God I wish Shonda would've done Mer/Alex instead of playing out her Mary Sue love affair with McDreamy... Mer/Alex would be real love, not some fairy tale, all fake and shallow like MD. Good work!

I completely agree

[hubschrauber]

with your Mary Sue analogy. Thank you for reading. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Sometimes I feel like I get carried away with my imagery. Mer/Alex makes so much sense because he gets her damage. ::sigh:: why must the writers torment us so?