More Than Friends

Aug 08, 2008 22:20

Pairing: A/O, A/S
Disclaimer:  I own nothing.  These characters belong to Dick Wolf.
Spoilers:  None
Summary:  What if one dinner could change everything?

*Note:  Here are the next two chapters.  I hope I can make up for the short post the other day.   Like it or hate it, let me know.  Thanks for reading!  Hope you enjoy it.  :)

Chapter 15

“What are you ( Read more... )

title: more than friends, length: ep!fic, author: alphagirl007

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Comments 16

ext_114302 August 9 2008, 03:14:19 UTC
YES! ::pumps fist:: Maybe, in the future, there'll be a [good] pic/story of Liv and Alex in the paper...?

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pooloutback August 9 2008, 03:17:54 UTC
Damn beat me too it.

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pooloutback August 9 2008, 03:17:39 UTC
YAY! finally. First comment too.

Excellent two chapters. Keep it up.

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arlene84 August 9 2008, 04:16:10 UTC
Loved It! You definitely made up for the short chapter before, this was amazing!

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zephyr_tempest August 9 2008, 04:23:45 UTC
hurumph, i wrote out a comment, and then the damn computer deleted it.

the general gist of the other comment was; Loved these two chapters, very awesomely written. glad that you made Olivia push the get alex to talk rather than make it a 'we're here so we may as well just spill our deepest secrets' type scene.

looking forward to the next one.

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beurre_blanc August 9 2008, 04:53:22 UTC
What I enjoyed most about these chapters was the amount of detail, and the really well-sustained pace. It was like a delicious feast with so many courses, and I kept looking at the scroll bar, and wondering whether I was suddenly going to hit a cliffhanger, or whether you'd end with a tease - instead you just kept delivering, and I finished reading with an enormous smile on my face. You've done another beautiful job.

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alphagirl007 August 9 2008, 12:46:45 UTC
Wow! That is quite a compliment coming from such an amazing writer like yourself. I am very humbled. I'm disappointed by the recent turn of events involving the MODS. I have enjoyed your work for a long time.

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