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Fic: Make Me Forget

Jun 30, 2008 13:20

I wrote this for the prompt table on cityofsin_cc. It's short and smut (as opposed to short and sweet). Enjoy :)

Title: Make Me Forget
Claim: Olivia Benson
Pairing: Alex/Liv
Prompt: 1 - Handcuffs - Table 1
Word Count: 1375
Rating: NC-17

( fic through here )

rating: nc-17, title: make me forget, author: akte, length: midlength

Comments 12

liketehweather June 30 2008, 04:01:35 UTC

Wow...this is very intense.. I love how damaged they are.. That is the only way I can imagine them. If that makes sense.
Exellent job.

akte June 30 2008, 04:27:20 UTC

Thanks :) Yeah, I see them as damaged too. But then everyone is in some way or another...

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akte June 30 2008, 15:16:14 UTC

GUH. That icon is HOT!

and thanks!

half_life33 June 30 2008, 16:24:34 UTC

reasons why i love you # 3873754234567876543754676496
lol. jk... but srsly.
i also see them as pretty fuckin damaged.. i mean come on. it can't be that easy!

akte July 1 2008, 06:50:51 UTC

Thanks hon :)

jello_o June 30 2008, 21:57:41 UTC

Very nice. I liked the underlying thought when it's asked who's place. It was awesome and hertbreaking.

akte July 1 2008, 06:56:37 UTC

Thanks :D

lucydiamond64 July 1 2008, 02:04:00 UTC

It's a damn good thing I waited to read this AFTER I got home from work...that was very erotic...but, tastefully so...WELL DONE!!!

akte July 1 2008, 06:57:47 UTC

hehehe, yeah, not really work safe ;)

Thanks heaps!

akte July 1 2008, 06:58:33 UTC

having said that, I wrote the last four paragraphs at work yesterday. One day it's going to bite me in the ass...