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highfructose_cs August 13 2009, 20:47:40 UTC
Very good chapter. I liked the addition of Dr. Carly Manning. I can't wait till she's back on Days of Our Lives.

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daxilla August 13 2009, 20:51:13 UTC
LOL just a personal joke. I am a HUGE Crystal Chappell fan. When I needed a doctor I just tucked her in there. It's not a cross-over or anything. More of an Homage!

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outdoorlvr03 August 13 2009, 21:58:38 UTC
Absolutely brilliant writing. You're stories are amazing.

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modesty65 August 14 2009, 03:22:49 UTC
I cant believe you killed Frank D!! Too funny. First Carly then Frankie.

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butchbensonlivs August 15 2009, 11:47:43 UTC
thanks for the new chapter, i stayed up to read it all last night! Great writing

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belianis August 16 2009, 05:52:20 UTC
I have to take issue with your Obama statement in the prolog. In a democracy, people are free to choose whether they like their head of government or not. Here in Tampa, FL, there are many Haitians. Many of the older ones left their country precisely because they felt that the government of the Duvaliers was illegitimate and therefore did not deserve their loyalty.

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daxilla August 16 2009, 06:30:07 UTC
Sweetie,
It is a joke. It is something I do in every disclaimer. I am making fun of America and the inability of certain factions in THIS country to allow gay people to live and let live. I am NOT saying anything about the political climate of countries I do not live in. If you look at the disclaimers on ALL my stories (Not asking you to read 'em, just look at the disclaimers) you will see that disclaimer #3 always contains a joke about America's issues with homosexuality. I am not making a statement about Haiti or anywhere else.

Also, just as there is freedom to choose, there is freedom of speech. It works both ways. I do not agree with 1/10 of the crap I see and hear everyday but if I worked myself into a dither I would be angry my whole life. It was not meant the way you interpreted it. Rest assured that I am making no statement on the politics of any country but mine.

Hope you have a much better day! =D

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thagreatgonzo August 16 2009, 10:51:39 UTC
This is a really good story. I can't wait to read the next installment.

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