Birthday Fic: The Night Before The Morning After

[alex_caligari]

Title: The Night Before The Morning After
Author: alex_caligari
Beta: jellybean728
Characters/Pairing: Ten, Rose, Sarah Jane, Mickey
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Puppets still attached to the strings of the BBC.
Author's Notes: So, I'm only a month late, but I intended this fic for _thirty2flavors birthday. Hopefully she'll be willing to accept it as...an early...Groundhog Day present.

Comments

[asahifirsa]

I can see why they didn't put it in :) Russel mentioned it was in the original script or such and was cut. I'd love to have seen this though :)

[alex_caligari]

I can see why they didn't put it in

So close! It would have been terribly awkward, with lots of neck scratching and foot shuffling and the Doctor saying the wrong thing at just the wrong moment. If only that was the worst part of their relationship.

Thanks for reading!

[milieva]

This is so great. I love the idea of the lot of them staying over at Sarah Jane's house, and the awkwardness which could insue.

I also like the way you played with lines and angles. Each of them is interconnected with someone else on various levels. I don't think there is a simple geometric shape to illustrate the relationships, so the Doctor may be thinking on it for some time.

[alex_caligari]

I love the idea of the lot of them staying over at Sarah Jane's house, and the awkwardness which could insue.

And Sarah Jane trying to be above it all, and Mickey not really knowing whose side he's on. Who hasn't had a party like this?

Each of them is interconnected with someone else on various levels.

I thought above explaining that in more detail, then realized how complicated it really was. Add in a Time Lord's sense of time and it gets even worse.

Thanks for the comment!