"Limericks" Follow-Up

[alex51324]

Here is the result of my Porn Prompt Submission Extravaganza.  It's a "Limericks" follow-up...but it's not actually all that porny, nor does it feature any of the things Allrevdup asked for.  **shrug**  Ya gets what ya pay for.

Please note that this is one possible way that things could go in House and Wilson's post-"Limericks" relationship.  I'm

Comments

[anonymous]

Hot and sweet! Liked the line about House's internalized homophobia.
Does House realize that Bulldog looks a lot like Von Lieberman? Guess not.

[nowadventuring]

Awww, okay, it was all sweet, though the beginning was appropriately offensive. And thank heaven, it wasn't sappy. Sweet and sappy are two completely different things.

I just have one question. Had House told him he loved him before, or was it a new thing? Because if it was new, the ending means something completly different than it does if he's done it before.

[alex51324]

I think House probably has, but he's kind of shy about things like that. He knew perfectly well that Wilson wouldn't be able to understand him in that context.

[nowadventuring]

Yep. Crafty little thing, he is.

[chowrie]

I noticed something, which shows how much I really, really read into your stories....

Here: "This time he tried something a little bit new--he licked his hand and then nestled Wilson’s balls in his palm, still sucking away noisily." Wilson already had a testicle removed right? So that should be a singular. I'm weird for noticing it, I know. Sorry. For my weirdness.

[alex51324]

**headdesk** Yes.

[chowrie]

You have a such a knack for realism. I appreciate that you were able to write a sexy scene in a relationship that honestly might not have that much sex, between Wilson's chemo and House's Vicodin. You're not just a good fanfic writer, but a good writer in general.

(That's not to say that I want every bit of smut to be realistic... I do love older, horny hot doctor sex.)

~LJless

*crosses fingers for spanking*

[nowadventuring]

Oh, hey, you. Small world.

[oliviazaratinga]

The beginning was pure House: offensive and offensively defensive about it. Loved all the lines. Wilson's perception (in his thoughts) about House's internalized homophobia was spot on. Of course, we know that from House's thoughts too, as he refers to himself as a homo. Loved him finding a way to use the fact he said he loved Wilson against Wilson, even though Wilson couldn't understand him. Couldn't be vulnerable for a moment, even though there's no way Wilson would reject him...unless he mentioned the concentration camp scenario again. Very nice!

[alex51324]

Hm, now I'm thinking it might be interesting to write a longer, serious story about House starting a relationship with Wilson and confronting internalized homophobia and self-loathing.

[hibernia1]

Now there's a thought worth pursuing...

[oliviazaratinga]

I agree. House is a contradiction. He's equal parts arrogance and self-loathing. It'd be interesting to read everything that made him that way.

[alex51324]

You're very welcome--I hope you have a good birthday!