Comments | alex51324: Due South: Friction

alex51324

Due South: Friction

May 18, 2008 20:26

Title: Friction
Rating: NC-17 for the sex
Pairing: F/K/V
Length: 2556
Summary: Ray and Ray shack up with Fraser, and develop their own brand of partnership. Sort of a character sketch with porn.

A/N: My first try at OT3.

“And there’s another thing, Stanley, would it kill you to wash a motherfucking dish every once in a while?”

Totally unfair-- ( Read more... )

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Comments 10

spuffyduds May 19 2008, 00:50:59 UTC

Oh, this is hot and fun! Good voices, and I got a kick out of how, even after they had a three-way breakthrough, Vecchio was still pissy about the coffee. ;-)

alex51324 May 19 2008, 00:54:35 UTC

Thanks! Yes, just because they got off once, they didn't like each other right away--they had to establish a pattern where "presence of other Ray = sex" before they started liking each other.

meresy May 19 2008, 03:09:29 UTC

I like this. :) The Rays can be so very prickly with each other -- it's fun to read as sublimation. *g*

teaphile May 19 2008, 04:03:08 UTC

Finally he’d invited them both over on the same night, told them that’s how it was going to be from then on, and they could like it or lump it.

How wonderfully practical.

He’d gotten a little bit of a taste for being top dog while he was Armando Langoustini, and going back to following Fraser’s lead, on top of being his crazy family’s general dogsbody, was a little rough on him.

I like this insight into Ray. As much as I like AngstyVegasRay stories, he does seem to like his power in CotW.

mlyn May 19 2008, 05:41:59 UTC

Oh Alex, this is excellent! I really love how you go into their fighting, their style and why, and how they get Fraser to feel at ease about it with a North Adventure example. :D Most Ray/Ray or OT3 fics with fighting use it as just a vehicle to get to the sex, so I like that you really explored it. And this:

and only put up with it because they knew that the first guy to suggest Fraser had to make a choice would lose by default.

That is SO IT. I love how you thought that through so well.

hibernia1 May 19 2008, 06:59:21 UTC

I'm reading DS-fic's! And I like them! This was hot & funny & I liked how the Rays had a talk with Dief first about them not really fighting before explaining it to Fraser.