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slvrbld747 March 24 2012, 03:23:17 UTC

It's like potato chips, I can't stop reading. :D I love the tension in your writing, but poor Don never catches a break. Who was the strange pushy female agent who miscalculated so badly? And OMG, they aren't really going to kill Don? So what is the game? And who is going to fry her butt for her mistake, and possibly, or really getting another agent killed?

Puzzled, but intrigued, love your writing. -SB

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aleo_70 March 24 2012, 03:31:02 UTC
Potato chips...mmmmmm.

Ah, so many questions. :)

And as to Don catching a break - you have noticed I like him at the mercy of Dean, no?

See you tomorrow!

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zubeneschamali March 24 2012, 03:49:54 UTC
*meep!*

Is it "soon" yet?

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aleo_70 March 24 2012, 04:00:51 UTC
*cackles evilly*

Nope.

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saphirablue March 24 2012, 07:30:37 UTC
\o/ Hurra! Another part! =)

Love the tension! And I'm curious about what Dean plans to do with Don (no, he won't shoot him.)

Thank you!

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aleo_70 March 25 2012, 01:00:13 UTC
Are you sure?

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saphirablue March 25 2012, 07:58:51 UTC
Yes. In my head canon Dean would do anything to avoid killing a human being - innocent bystander, Cop, FBI Agent, another hunter, victim of a demon/supernatural being - doesn't matter. I know the show went in a bit of different direction but as I said - my head canon. :)

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aleo_70 March 25 2012, 08:10:06 UTC
Whilst I think Dean would avoid killing a human if he could, given the right scenario I believe he would.

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aleo_70 March 25 2012, 01:01:57 UTC
*blows raspberry*

I love this 'verse, Don v Dean is just too much fun to leave alone.

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msgrahamcracker March 28 2012, 01:39:43 UTC
Sorry, I'm a little late to the party here, but I just had to tell you how much I loved this first chapter. I could point out that I really like the idea of the double set-up meeting in the beginning. I could list all the great lines (Dean's especially). I could rave about the image of Don, on his knees in front of an open grave, with Dean holding a gun to the back of his head (OMG). But, really, just Dean and Don together made the story. They always do. Great characters, great writing.

But, Dean wouldn't really ... would he?

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aleo_70 March 28 2012, 12:13:14 UTC
Hi MsGC!

The image you picked was what inspired me to write this but as you have since discovered there was only one way to make that work...

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