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liliaeth March 7 2012, 15:28:53 UTC
I love this story :-)

And now I can go on imagining that the BAU agents Don gets to talk to are those from Criminal Minds*g*

Either way, this series was damn near perfect and I don't even watch Numb3rs.

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aleo_70 March 8 2012, 12:30:49 UTC
Thank-you. I'm glad you liked it, even without knowing Numb3rs.

Cheers

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tygerc March 7 2012, 18:57:24 UTC
Oh noes! It's over! Can we have some more? =)

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aleo_70 March 8 2012, 12:31:36 UTC
I shall have to work on that, I've had a short idea but I don't think it would work.

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saphirablue March 7 2012, 19:46:17 UTC
I love this!

Don's POV on Dean. Dean trusting Don. Don working together with Dean in order to find Sam. Wonderful!

Thank you! :)

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aleo_70 March 8 2012, 12:33:39 UTC
Nice distinction there, Dean trusting Don, not so much the other way around. :)

I do so love having Don and Dean together.

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saphirablue March 10 2012, 07:47:14 UTC
Yeah, there would have to be a lot to have happend in order for Don to trust Dean. A lot.

Me too! Even though, I would love to see David and/or Colby having to work together with Dean in order to save Don... :D Or Sam with Don's Team in order to save Dean and Don who are trapped somewhere by a monster and have to work together in order to stay alive. :D *is shutting up now*

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aleo_70 March 10 2012, 12:51:05 UTC
So... have you given any thought to what possible sequels I could write? :P

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msgrahamcracker March 8 2012, 00:29:48 UTC
Nicely done. Don managed to avoid getting his butt in too much trouble and I agree completely with liliaeth that the interviews should be held by Hotch and Morgan. I had to laugh at Don asking Dean about the portal and accepting the answer that it was safe for someone to die in now. I'm glad Dean called to check on Don and thank him for his help saving Sam. Now, of course, you know you have to write the story where Don needs to call on the Winchesters for help. You have too.

Thanks for a great story. I loved every word.

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aleo_70 March 8 2012, 12:36:47 UTC
Don calling on the Winchesters? *adds to file*

I had an idea on another meeting between the two with some intervention that leads to an unsustainable incident. But then, thinking on it now, perhaps a short one or two chapter piece might work....leave it with me.

I am pleased you enjoyed this, it was a long time coming.

Cheers

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kayto1 March 8 2012, 02:49:47 UTC
Nice job! And I like that Don know has Dean's number ;). Because that means another, right?

I enjoyed this - it flowed nicely.

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aleo_70 March 8 2012, 12:37:58 UTC
How could I not write another instalment of Don v Dean, there is just something about the two of them together, the collision of their personalities and their 'verses...

Thank-you for reading along

Cheers

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