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tygerc February 29 2012, 18:57:04 UTC
Yay! I just totally love these crossovers. I've read the previous ones again and again.

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aleo_70 March 1 2012, 15:14:29 UTC
Flatterer... :)

Thank-you!

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kayto1 February 29 2012, 20:11:34 UTC
Spooky! Love the outsider view point on the Winchesters. Can't wait to read more!

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aleo_70 March 1 2012, 15:16:41 UTC
Outside POV is fun given what they do is beyond the normal belief systems of most people even in their own 'verse. From another 'verse... well, that's just more fun.

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msgrahamcracker February 29 2012, 21:22:51 UTC
Don can certainly empathize with Dean's worry and concern for Sam. I mean, they are both incredibly good looking, strong, dedicated, heroic and just down right yummy, AND they also are uber protective of their younger siblings. What I like about this scenario when Sam was taken was the comment Dean made that they were ready for some supernatural creature of some sort - not a human being. Human beings are always their downfall.

One of my favorite parts of this chapter was Dean mentioning Best's name and gloating just a little when Don admitted they didn't even have that.

"Damn straight, point. Stupid fed." Oh, I loved that. Dean is so distraught over the situation and he is probably very close to losing it all over the clueless federal agent who inadvertantly implied that Dean didn't do everything he could to save his brother. Sooooo Dean! And Don's compassion is right in character, too.

I'm loving this story! I can't wait to see how Don reacts to the witch coming to his apartment!

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aleo_70 March 1 2012, 15:22:29 UTC
...they are both incredibly good looking, strong, dedicated, heroic and just down right yummy...

Are you picturing them both in the same room, one with his shirt off....?

*offers a glass of water and gently fans*

Dean can't help himself, hence the gloat. If the situation wasn't so dire I'm sure he'd enjoy the way Don flounders around them especially as he'd recognise a skilled, confident agent when he saw one.

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aleo_70 March 1 2012, 15:25:00 UTC
But of course! :)

But it fought me several times, so hopefully it all pans out okay.

Cheers

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alliance chap 2 manictater January 27 2013, 22:45:59 UTC
What a great premise. Not only would the "Hunter" know the boy's tactics, got exactly how to trick them. Awesome.

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