Comments | alemyrddin: Lost Riffs day 2 ficlet: Loose threads

alemyrddin

Lost Riffs day 2 ficlet: Loose threads

Jan 25, 2008 10:27

Written for Lost Riffs day 2 at lostsquee, prompt Time and Place

Loose threads
Lindsey Littleton, 568 words, G.

( Sydney, Australia - September 29th, 2004 )

my fic, lost fic, lost, lost riffs

Comments 20

slybrunette January 25 2008, 12:57:04 UTC

I love this! I've always been a big fan of the whole Jack/Claire sibling storyline, and you played with that wonderfully here.

Great fic!

alemyrddin January 25 2008, 13:52:59 UTC

Thank you! I love very much the idea that Jack and Claire are siblings too - and I strongly hope they are going to know about it soon.
This was a new angle, for me, so I'm very glad that you liked it, and that you think it worked.

Thanks for reading! :)

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alemyrddin January 25 2008, 15:55:25 UTC

Thank you! I started thinking that there must have been someone who had known about Jack and Claire being siblings - and then it struck me that Claire's aunt probably knew at least something about Christian.
Thank you so much, for reading and for your enthusiastic comment! :)

gottalovev January 25 2008, 14:56:13 UTC

I read the name and was all "who???" but then... ohhh! that is such a great idea to go to a peripheral character like that and see the effect of the crash! great job!

alemyrddin January 25 2008, 15:57:49 UTC

lol. I actually had to look up the name - and I'm still not sure of the surname, though it seems pretty likely.

I'm very happy you liked it. I want so much Jack and Claire to know about their relationship that I started thinking about who else might know about it. And then, it struck me that Claire's aunt probably knew at least something about Christian.

Thank you very much for reading and commenting! :)

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alemyrddin January 27 2008, 16:45:16 UTC

True, we never got to know how they reacted and it's something I'm curious about, too.
Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

janie_tangerine January 25 2008, 22:37:10 UTC

Tanto di onore per la scelta del personaggio! Direi che è esattamente quello che penserebbe Lindsey in una situazione del genere e come potrebbe sentirsi; il finale poi ci sta benissimo. Gran bella idea e splendida esecuzione ;)

alemyrddin January 27 2008, 16:46:25 UTC

Grazie! Ho cercato un'angolazione un po' diversa, qualcuno che sapesse di Jack e Claire e potesse volerne parlare...
Grazie mille per il commento. :)