Moonlight Flowers_Chapter 3

[aleksiina_26]

Midnight Flowers

Chapter: 3/?

Rating: NC-17 overall.

Bands/Characters: Alice Nine, The GazettE, OC's, Atsushi Sakurai.

Pairings: very fluid pairings.

Genre: AU, angst, supernatural

Warnings: male x male, violence, suggestiveness, group sex, adult themes, foul language.

Summary: Can two rival vampire covens learn to coexist in one small city? For

Comments

[redroses1791]

whee, update! and hey, Atsushi. unf. ;D i love that even moar. can't wait for the next chapter ! xx fantastically written as always!

[aleksiina_26]

I just couldn't help myself, Atsushi HAD to go in there somewhere xD Thank you so much for the kind comment *hugs* xoxo

[puss_nd_boots]

I am LOVING the amount of drama already, and the rivals haven't even appeared! The revelation that Ruki had tried to kill Shou was a bit of a shock, but then to hear he had reformed - it all made the whole thing that much more intriguing! And I LOVE how intricate the worldbuilding is getting, with the vampire laws and protocols. I also love the way you portray the elders, especially the way Sakurai hit on Tora and Tora sassed back! (Tora is turning out to be a very effective plot device, by the way, since we mere mortals experience the vampire workd through his eyes!) I'm also quite interersted to know the backstory of the rivals and how a newbie managed to take over and reform a coven, which, I imagine, isn't exactly standard practice in the vampire world. I really can't wait to see where this all goes (not to mention the coming smut . . .)

[aleksiina_26]

I saw your message on tumblr and it reminded me that I should come and reply to comments here too xD What can I say, drama is always fun to write xD There is much to be revealed about Ruki and Shou's relationship, and the whole reason why they have so much tension between them will be clarified, you'll see ;) I tried to think in terms of "if such a powerful group of creatures has no leadership, how long would it take for them to either destroy the human race and/or get exterminated" which is how I came up with the council. I won't go crazy in depth with it because I want my story to move along and not get stuck in descriptive writing, but I did want to clarify the whole structure/hierarchy. I couldn't help but write Sakurai in there, he makes such a fine vampire *drools* and you know how much Sakurai/Tora is a fetish pairing of mine, I really couldn't help myself but write some sassy/flirty dialogue between the two. Sassy!Tora was definitely called for xD I might develop their relationship a little but its not the focus of the story

[xme_chanx]

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Ughhh I want to know more about Tora! xD He's so complex, I love it. His interactions with Sakurai are amusing and sexy (I'm sure we'll see more of that, yeah? xD)

I like the way you set up the elders and the verse. It all flows very well, and makes sense, it's refreshing to see a vampire fic where it's not just wild killing and unexplained riches. I hope that makes sense. The point is, it's not cliche. <3

ughhhhh \(^o^)/ it's great! Sorry this comment is crap, I'm tired.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter and it's porny goodness hahaha

[aleksiina_26]

Isn't he mysterious, with his dark past and faded memories and conflicted persona...*sighs* xD I've always had a thing for the silent broody types and Tora is just perfect in that role, on top of the fact that I think it somewhat fits with his personality to some extent. Sakurai/Tora is my guilty pleasure, I will definitely write more fun interaction between these two. I don't know how far I'll take it but there will be some more flirting, with Tora sassing back xD

I think having some kind of government/ruling class is what's missing from a lot of vampire stories imho. You can't have such powerful creatures roaming around without any law or guidelines of some sort and expect it to go smoothly. Well, that's what I think anyway xD Same goes for the unexplained riches xD With eternity at your disposal, you have time to build up some businesses from the ground and make them successful xD

Pfffttt no comment of yours is crap! Your input is always very appreciated my dear ^3^ thanks for reading *hugs* xoxo

[himenojigoku]

Atsushi-sama❤ I swear that man bathed in the fountain of youth!
As for the newly revealed politics and drama oh O_O I don't know what to think. So much has went down and then Ruki's coven has been changed into someone's else's. I feel like they did that on purpose. I'm quite wary like they are because Ruki's nature is very devious. And I agree with Tora, it's better to be on Atsushi's good side :) Great job hun! *Hugsback*

[aleksiina_26]

I agree 0_0 how does he stay so youthful looking I do not know but I need his secret so I can be young forever too T^T I should ask Hyde too while I'm at it -___-

There will be more plot twists coming up, you haven't seen nothing yet xD Ruki's coven will finally make its appearance next chapter, it should be interesting, especially when you get all their backstory.

Tora is a smart boy, its always better to be on Acchan's good side ;) Thank you so much for reading and commenting ^_^ *hugs* xoxo