Title: Eta Aquarii
Chapter: 2/2
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Tora x Saga
Genre: AU, romance, fluff
Warnings: male x male, suggestiveness, manual sex, semi-public sex, foul language, adult themes.
Summary: Sometimes, its easier to build a relationship on silence when the words feel inadequate.
Commentary: Part 2!
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It was one of the craziest things he'd ever done, and he didn't even think he had it in him, but in retrospect, he was really glad he did. )
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I've been waiting for you to post something smutty and HELL it's so worthy to be waited!!!!
Love you d(><)b
stars seeing night at the roof top and Saga defended the Tiger at the class are just WIN!!!!
("Tonight…in my bed, you
can make all the noise you want, but now we
have to be quiet…")
Honestly I was kinda expecting a hot smutty scene at Tora's bed with Saga screaming his name OUT LOUD but damn girl I more than love their first-romantic-yet-funny making love!!!!
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I really was in the mood to write super sappy romance so yeah, it felt like a teenage soap opera but it was so much fun to write XD And they do get their sex scene at the very end, its just not as explicit as the library scene because I followed the guidelines of my KB square, but I think its still pretty hot even if its less smutty ;)
I'm glad you enjoyed and thank you so much for reading my dear xoxo
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- watches tooth fall out - >_> I suppose this is revenge for the shiitake mushrooms I last threw D:- throws lemon, black ice tea and green bell peppers and Swedish meatballs - REVENGE ( ... )
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*Still aches about the shiitake mushroom, laughs at tooth falling out*
*Stirs herself a pitcher of lemon iced tea and sends back pepper and meatballs with a tennis racket* XD (What the hell is this food thing anyway, I sense a mild obsession with eating...XD)
Seriously, I felt like I was writing a kdrama XD And you can say it, that scene in the class is 100% cliché and cheesy XD but oh so very satisfying, I mean, it had to happen. The good boy defending the rebel *squee* it was too cute to pass up. I'm glad it didn't feel too cliché to you, but I really don't mind if it does, it really is a fluffy corny fic XD
Les prochaines pièces seront surement plus...violentes XD And don't worry, if you pass out I'll send Tora to reanimate you with a nice kiss...but no tongue! He's mine! *hisses*
Overdose de sucre haha XD But its so good...thanks for the awesome/silly comment as always ma chère xoxo
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You're the queen! Of making a hot-fluffy-sweet-romantic-touching-pure love story!! XD idk what to say anymore, this story is goddamn awesome lol
If I had 10 thumbs, I would give those all to you XD
The 1st part was total sweet-romantic-fluffy side while the 2nd was freaking hot! XD
I think those two need another story? Maybe? Lol
Good job girl!
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And of course it isn't my story if there isn't a bit of hot porn thrown in the cake batter ;) I'm definitely writing more Tora x Saga although I don't think of continuing that verse since it was a oneshot but who knows, I might get inspired ;) I'm really flattered you enjoyed it :D Thanks for the sweet comment my dear xoxo
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I love the first time in the library, where Tora is so disappointed that Saga is like everyone else in that moment when he assumes that the badboy can't be brilliant. LOVE IT.
I like how you did silence too, it's very unique and sweet. Though I must admit, I'd like to see this violent alternative XD
Thank you for sharing this with us, and I look forward to more from you when you get back. 8D
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I'm such a sucker for school fics too, I rarely find good ones so I took matters into my own hands XD That scene...such a big catalyst! Its when Saga realizes that there's tenderness and fragility underneath the tough exterior so its really instrumental to the fic, and it was awesome to write ;)
My violent alternative involved a totally different pairing and a medical/orthodontic gag with bondage and strong D/s, and I might still write it who knows...
Thank you so much for reading dear, I'm glad you enjoyed xoxo
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They are just so SWEET! I love them both here, so adorable
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I'm glad you enjoyed, thank you so much for reading xoxo
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