Homesick

[aleksiina_26]

Title: Homesick

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Tora x Saga

Genre: PWP, POV, angst, drabble

Warnings: male x male, sex, adult themes.

Summary: Home is where you are.

Commentary: So I'm away from home, doing lots of travelling (there will be a travelling/party life update soon, I've been debauched XD) and my only source of internet for now is my mobile, so that

Comments

[sciencesaves]

Oh shit... oh good god

[aleksiina_26]

Hey sorry for the late reply, still no internet where I am (although I'm having an awesome time, being super busy and such XD) so I'm dependent on my phone :P I do hope you had lots of fun drinking your face off XD

[puss_nd_boots]

I am DAMN impressed that you did this on a phone! I can't even type on my iPad without it being full of typos! This was very, very beautiful, so much poetic and vivid imagery here. I'm getting a sense of it being set in the Royal Family universe, long before the happy ending, when Tora is married and seeing Saga in secret - am I right? In any case, it's beautiful, sensual and romantic, with just a bit of melancholy. Lovely job, as always, and I'm glad you're having fun!

[aleksiina_26]

Eurgh, it was a bitch to write, although I'm a compulsive texter, I have practice writing on that tiny keyboard XD I think the beauty of this piece is a lot about using very few words to convey lots of emotional intensity. Without getting much into plot. It was about desperation and helplessness and this passion that stems from it

[k435y]

written start to finish on my phone o_o you are amazing. i hate typing stuff on my phone. D8 XD

i feel like i'm reading an erotic, yet poetic love letter between two lovers. XD

& i suddenly feel like crying at the ending... D8 it aches my heart. T_T

thank you for sharing. =D

[aleksiina_26]

Yeah, I'm crazy like that XD When something has to get written, it just has to by any means necessary otherwise I don't get peace of mind XD It was a bitch to write though lol

It is a bit of a passionate letter in a sense, because of the first person narrative it feels very personal and intimate, like Tora telling Saga how much he wants him, needs him. Its hopelessly romantic in many ways. And then there's that bittersweetness that stems from the fact that they can't be together, living only for those minutes when they can be one and never able to get what they fully need. Its beautiful but also very sad.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting dear xoxo

[fallen_am_i]

This was amazing... So nice and heated and emotional... I loved every word of it dear... :O I liked the expressions, the feelings... *dumbfounded*

AMAZING xD

[aleksiina_26]

Hey you! Long time no see, how have you been?

Its amazing the inspiration that can come out of a few emo songs and rainy weather XD I'm glad I posted it even if it was just a tiny little thing on my phone ;) Thanks for reading my dear xoxo

[yousei_ranka]

"It's your fragility that makes it beautiful."

when I read that line, I was like ////w////

so beautifully written and somewhat touching, at first I thought it's gonna be a lovely ending, but then I found the line

"Home is our forbidden love."

I know something was not right, that line makes my heart sink :/

anyway, great work <333

[aleksiina_26]

I think that Saga has this fragility to him that transcends even the physical, maybe its the sensibility of his music? I just had to touch on it ;) And what can I say, it was raining, I was listening to sad music, angst happened. Pretty much perfect conditions for it to be honest XD

Although I like to think that angst can be beautiful in it's own way, and that yes its sad that they can't be together, but when they are its just so beautiful and perfect...*sighs*

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for reading xoxo