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olivethegreat April 25 2012, 21:18:45 UTC
I love the shots of Jonas at the toy stores. :) And I can't wait to see what Lander will look like when he is older.
I think the letter seemed just fine! And I enjoy that you are writing this story in a letter style - it's something different which is interesting.

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katee412 April 26 2012, 03:21:52 UTC
I think this was really well done and not awkward at all! I think it really expressed her feelings as well as showing us what she's up to (and your awesome makeovers). Great update :D

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sammyhotstud April 26 2012, 03:29:53 UTC
Aw, I love the toy store!

Interesting that both Larsons are attracted to Blossom. Personally I'm hoping kid#3 is fathered by Malcolm 'The Eyebrows' Landgraab. ;)

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superfr0g April 26 2012, 06:53:58 UTC
I didn't think it was awkward! I really enjoyed it! And I look forward to the next one (:

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madame_ugly April 26 2012, 11:54:43 UTC
(crap, my first comment got eaten--I hope this one is a clear).

The letter reads just fine. In fact, I like it a lot. It's not just a "dropping a bomb" letter but a conversation between Blossom and Lazlo (ok, one sided). It really does read like a letter written by someone who's just going with the flow, chatting to someone else as they write. It goes well with Blossom's personality (casual, honest, free spirited).

Ooh, I see you there, Malcolm Landgraab! (and I've always played Jodie Larson as lesbian so I laughed at her lusting over Blossom)

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