Rin/Girey Nano (Beta/Excerpt)

[aldersprig]

There is no greater curse than ‘May you never sleep soundly,’ and no greater blessing than a soft, dry, and warm bed. - Ancient Cālenyena saying

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[thnidu]

So where will this one go? (Rhetorical question, I know the answer is Gregor's favorite: "Let's just ... see what happens.")

The Doctor scribbles a note and passes it to thnidu:

weren't quite ready ^ leap.
^to

[aldersprig]

*grin* This is an accidentally-publicly-posted excerpt of the novel I'm working on. The title of the novel is "Into Lanamer," so I imagine it will go to Lanamer ;-)

Thanks for the typo catch!

[rix_scaedu]

I enjoyed this. If I'm not confused by time, place & rewriting, are things going to get exciting shortly?

Possible typo - "The woman here, they're not like here" - I think one of these 'here's should be a 'there' - no idea which one though. :)

[kelkyag]

I think exciting is in the works shortly, too.

[aldersprig]

*grins*