Comments | aldersprig: Princesses, a story of the Aunt Family for the March Giraffe Call

aldersprig

Princesses, a story of the Aunt Family for the March Giraffe Call

Mar 23, 2012 11:23

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morepls, giraffecall: result, character: rosaria, verse: theauntfamily, giraffecall

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janetmiles March 23 2012, 15:38:24 UTC

Oh my. *shivers*

aldersprig March 23 2012, 15:42:32 UTC

*smile* is that good?

janetmiles March 23 2012, 16:16:44 UTC

Yes, that's a good reaction. I like that the, um, not-Tarot cards actually shift. And I'm worried for Lily, since she's already seen some of the things Aunt Rosaria is seeing.

aldersprig March 23 2012, 16:38:42 UTC

Seeing isn't inherently bad...

kelkyag March 23 2012, 16:33:49 UTC

Given that Lily's already looking at a Quest, that seems like a good thing. And yes, perhaps a romantic one, too, it being for love ...

(Princesses with Agency, woot!)

Last paragraph, "seen" seems wrong? "Seemed" maybe? And maybe a comma after "That hadn't"?

aldersprig March 23 2012, 16:38:58 UTC

Seemed wrong, yes. *goes looking to fix*

eseme April 5 2012, 01:32:04 UTC

I somehow missed this when I went by it in my friends list, but caught it on a summary post.

I love, love, love that last image.

aldersprig April 5 2012, 01:35:11 UTC

*grin* Awesome!