Wow! Now THAT's a different variation on modern fantasy! I can't recall the last time an evil nasty actually wanted to go back to where it came from. What a twist! Ya know, I'd really like to see some of the ideas in this taken to a longer story length.
What's ironic is that I'm currently involved in a play-by-email role playing game where otherworldly creatures have eaten the souls of a number of highschool kids and have taken possession of their memories and bodies. And, yes, the players, including myself, are playing those aforementioned creatures.
O_o I think I need to go hide somewhere warm with a cup of hot cocoa and a blankie. And no fireplace. And not twitch. And let some of the creepy wear off ...
Third to last paragraph, I think "your" should be "you're".
Oh wow. That creature got the wrong person. Sort of like those aliens of yours that couldn't take the atmosphere of Earth and did really badly in hosts with allergies.
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Wow! Now THAT's a different variation on modern fantasy! I can't recall the last time an evil nasty actually wanted to go back to where it came from. What a twist! Ya know, I'd really like to see some of the ideas in this taken to a longer story length.
What's ironic is that I'm currently involved in a play-by-email role playing game where otherworldly creatures have eaten the souls of a number of highschool kids and have taken possession of their memories and bodies. And, yes, the players, including myself, are playing those aforementioned creatures.
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It's sort of a dark version of Changeling: the Dreaming, which I played happily for years.
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Third to last paragraph, I think "your" should be "you're".
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But wow, creepy. In a good way. A good twist.
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