Soo.... What do YOU want me to write today?

[aldersprig]

Taking prompts again... on a general theme of gender, sexuality, and how they go funky.

I'll write at least 150 words on everything I get between now and this time tomorrow. And, as always, tipping guarantees more wordage - and helps me buy the lovely giraffe carpet. For more information, my Donor landing page is here ( and on LJ)

Comments

[fayanora]

Two people of opposite gender identities living in the same body, fighting over the body's gender expression.

[fayanora]

Excellent!

Luckily for me, Alex (the only boy in the system who might have the strength to be annoying) doesn't care what gender expression the body has.

[aldersprig]

Thank you! *bows*

I have never shared my body with another consciousness (as far as I know), so I have to rely on second-hand accounts for writing such.

[fayanora]

Makes it even more impressive! :-D

Hmm...

[ysabetwordsmith]

>>the quite, nonsensical swearing<<

I think this should be "quiet, nonsensical" but it could be "quite nonsensical."

>>then tucked the couch-blanket over his shoulders.<<

Vague antecedent. With two male names in play, you need to specify "Jimmy's shoulders" here.

I like the subtle conflict in this story.

Re: Hmm...

[aldersprig]

Right on both, going to change, thank you.

And thanks very much. :-)

Edited story

[aldersprig]

Abby woke on Saturday to find herself sleeping on the couch again, and swore, the quiet, nonsensical swearing she preferred. There was a pile of clothes on the armchair and, somewhere in the midst of the clothes, Jimmy snoring