Luke and Mike... Talk (More of the Chess AU)

[aldersprig]

This happens after Slave and after, subsequently, Cya, Luke, and Leo have had an off-screen conversation. Thanks to

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[thnidu]

AAAaaaahhhhh! (Great big happy sigh.)

• nedetakai
?→ nedetakaei

• He’d neverbeen out there
> Space between "never" and "been".

• If I Iet things happen to Leo
→ If I let
> Looks like your hands got into a bananana syndrome with capital I's. ;-)

[aldersprig]

"Nanny knew how to spell Banana, she just didn't know how to stop" ? :-D

[thnidu]

Yes, and I just realized that if you don't see my comment as I do, in a serif font, that makes no sense to you. In a sans-serif font like Arial, capital i (I aye, sir!) and lowercase L (l! What the bloody 'ell 'appened 'ere?) look identical, or nearly so. You typed a capital i instead of a small L in "let":

[aldersprig]

I got it! And missed it in editing because I was using a sans serif font. :-)

[kelkyag]

So, AU. Does canon Luke ever get smacked upside the head (or whatever else it might take) and have something like this talk (and smooch) with Mike, or is it all angst and redirection for ever and ever?

Nit: "Someone hit my upside the head" my -> me.

[aldersprig]

That's a good question! I don't know yet, but I'll think about it.