3WW: Not Interfering #FridayFlash #weblit

[aldersprig]

Three Word Wednesday is a once-weekly 3-word writing prompt.

The three words are harmless, moist, yelp.
The yelp caught Allie’s attention, drew her out of the book she’d let herself become engrossed in. High-pitched, terrified, and loud, it penetrated the thick walls of her shop. It had come from somewhere out back; a second yelp, louder still

Comments

[eseme]

Ah, fun. I did figure it out when she called the boy a pup and then you described his eyes like those of a huskey.

Still good fun. It's always nice to see a bully get their due.

Typo:
“Leave him along, Fred,” she called, hurrying over to the pair. “He’s harmless.”
Leave him alonE

[aldersprig]

I'm sad it was obvious, but glad you enjoyed it :-)

Thanks for the typo catch .

[cluudle]

It wasn't obvious to me.

[eseme]

Hey, not totally obvious, as is clear below. Also, I read a lot of vampire and werewolf stuff, and I know how your mind works.

Plus it is always nice to see a bully get what karma has coming to them (though in this case, possibly overkill).

[ext_262016]

Clevery done and very very well written!

Gautami's Comment

[ext_93553]

I was totally engrossed!

thigh Story

[aldersprig]

*grins* I could write more. It feels like a deLint fanfic to me, honestly, though I don't normally write fanfic (the doc title is "3ww inthestyleof deLint")