Keyed Up, a story of Tir Na Cali #weblit

[aldersprig]

This is a sequel to " Gifted," a story set in a Duchess' harem in my Tir na Cali setting.

Keyed UpStephen stared at the slender box with the single key. The other gifts had ranged from neutral, co-worker, distant-relative sorts of Christmas presents (Yule, this fucked-up place had no Christmas, just a knockoff holiday they called something

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[eseme]

Ah yes, men are from Mars, women are from Venus. No one understands anyone else. *grins*

Poor guy. I don't think he's going to like this much.

Typos?

(Yule, this fucked-up place had no Christmas, just a knockoff holiday they called something different, ever if there was feasting and presents and even a day, thank God, of vacation, even for the toys, even for the prisoners of war)
I think that should be "even if there was feasting"

Why she wouldn’t Efran, who had been serving her so well for the last year.
Why she wouldn't want Efran

[aldersprig]

Fixed. Thanks. And I guess I ought to write the third piece in the trio, eh?

((I need a Cali icon. those are always the hardest))

[eseme]

I think the third bit would add that last piece of understanding.

[jolantru]

I like this. :)

[aldersprig]

Yay ;-D

[aldersprig]

I'll fix the typo, thanks. :-)

I think I want to write one from the Lady's point of view but I'm not sure exactly how to.