[Fanfic] How To Get Your Awesome Back. The Hooligan Way.

[alchemistofbing]

Title: How To Get Your Awesome Back. The Hooligan Way.
Author: alchemistofbing
Genre: Humor and crack
Characters/Pairings: Germany, Prussia; will be Prussia/South Italy later on 
Summary: Prussia lost his awesome! How in the seven circles of hell can he get it back? ... how can he lose his awesome in the first place?
Warnings: profanity thanks to

Comments

[lupis_ashes]

“Gilbert, tell me you’re awesome.”

He let out a tormented squealing sound and looked at Ludwig with an alarmed expression on his face, “Where’s my birdie?”

I haven't even finished reading yet and I'm going to die from keeping my laughter in.

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...

...

Okay. I just got back from the toilet (where I proceeded to giggle and grin and laugh myself stupid). I don't think my teacher suspects anything.

Now... YOU. YOU AREAKDNKAL;SFDJDL;SKGAJ;SDGHFHAJKSDHF. I am not coherent. This was so freakin' funny. YOU WIN. AGAIN.

*hands you my heart* Take it. Use it as a pillow. Seriously... You and your lovelies make my days so much brighter~

Critique: a few punctuation mistakes, but otherwise, we're a-okay~! *thumbs up*

[alchemistofbing]

I- I cannot take your heart and use it as a pillow! D: What'll you use for a heart?! Nooo~ I cannot accept it :'(

xDD I will fix it! And maybe add more - I think it's lacking somesing, hmm -_o

Anyway, thank you! xDD You're reading it during your class? :O

naughty naughty >:3 hurr

[lupis_ashes]

According to my brothers I don't have one, so I don't think it will matter too much. XD

Hm... Perhaps it just seems that way because it's just one scene? I dunno... Do what you think is best.

I was, yes. XD I'd finished my work. 4 hours early

[alchemistofbing]

xDDD You keep it in a box, do you?

(I do too >:D)

I think it's okay now. I think. Who knows what my head pigeons would think of next... kkkkff WAI, PERFECTIONISM, WAI???

You did, did you? THEN WHY AM I STILL CLEANING??? DD:

[asatosei]

AHAHAH I LAUGHED LIKE WHAT

thank you for this ♥

[alchemistofbing]

xDDD Thank you! :D

[kurokami_kuroi]

I'm still laughing like mad while typing this XD THIS IS AWESOME!

[alchemistofbing]

Wait till he gets to the hooligan bit of the 'awesome revival program' :|

xDD Thank you! :D

[kurokami_kuroi]

I'm already snickering just by reading the 'awesome revival program', 'cause Prussia + doing things hooligan way = TOTAL CHAOS XD

[alchemistofbing]

xDDD ohohoho~ and worse, I hope, with what I'm planning for the future. Expect a lot of vandalism, runn- *gets hit by a brick before she spoils any more*

And dude- Prussia, Denmark, and South Italy = Bro(hoe) THUGS! >:D

[alchemistofbing]

I-I had to change some awkward sentences again right after I posted it DD: The failness burned my eyes xDDD Thank you! :D

AND PRUSSIA/ROMANO FTW!!! 8DDDDD THAT PAIRING'S MY OTP YO.

The fic might not seem like the sweet type, but believe me :| It'll be a bi~t fluffy later xDDD

[alchemistofbing]

xD Yeay- another P/R fan! Prussia/Romano seems to be a bit rare, I think :(

Especially when it comes to the draft! xDDD It's like piecing a puzzle together after finding out they don't fit... although it makes writing about 200x more enjoyable, I think xD

<-weirdo

[sweet_ran]

First read for me: I like it and I think it's very, very funny.
Now, what I felt like the first two paragraphs were a bit too long -but maybe because you like to make humor with a 'awesome' opening? Haha.

[alchemistofbing]

xDD I tend to babble a bit~ should I cut it the first two paragraphs down a little? :D

And thank you! >:DD

[sweet_ran]

Just... a little bit! XD You need to let it breathe, sometimes it feel like you want to say too much in only a sentence-if you know what I mean. If I could feel some fresh air around it, I think it would be perfect. (It's my opinion btw XD)

[alchemistofbing]

Nonono! Opinions matter! >:D

I will do it!!! :D Cut some sentences I will! (first two paragraphs, eh?) Like a knight on a bunny!

... Where's my chainsaw~?