So apparently I'm emo now

[alcetis]

I always poem about the new years.

Also, everything is ridiculously purple/emo/flat. Crit? Please? *begs*

Comments

[rocketgirl2]

I like it! (and your icon). Especially the imagery of Time as a drunkard. And knocking over tables and such. Yay!
I don't like the last line. You shouldn't be *perpetually* drunk.
The second-to-last stanza...I see how it fits, but it...doesn't fit, at the same time. Introduces a new topic too closely to the end, or something.
Other than that, it's good. Really, it is. :)