Wow. that was as hot as it was heartbreaking. The overriding feeling I am left with after reading this is intense. Everything about this story was so, so much. Their pain, their regret, their passion, their love, their loss...it's so very all consuming that I feel like I've been punched, pummeled and squeezed really hard now that it's done. I'm so glad they found each other again though, neither of them was surviving particularly well without the other.
Bravo, my dears! This is amezzin'!! It hurt in all the right ways :D
I love the care with which you choose just the right icon for your comment, it's something I look forward to every time you reply to something :D
Thank you, from Ruffle and I, for reading, and I'm sure I speak for us both when I say we're thrilled you read this and liked it. Thanks. darling! <333
It was genuinely my pleasure. You know I love me some tasty angst and this is yummy with the achy stuff! I love fics that make my chest hurt and my eyes burn. This was perfect that way. Thanks to both of you for writing it!
*looks bashful* I love using icons to express myself. Call it the frustrated artist in me. I am not nearly as talented as I wish I was but my brain is vision rich so, yeah, the icons *loopy grin*
The coming back together was just as intense as the falling apart but in a romantic, heart healing way. All isn't quite forgiven and there's still a measure of trepidation but these two are headed in the right direction and even if there are missteps you've left me believing they're finally going to have the happy ending they deserve. Beautifully done.
I love this vivid description: There are so many bodies, so many people, all moving like the pulse of the place is alive inside them. Colin stands in the midst of it all, the noise and sweat, the music so loud that his teeth vibrate with it. Ultraviolet light filters down to the floor, where it’s all glowing eyes and bra straps, everything white is an iridescent underscore.
Wow. I just realised we never responded to this, I'm so sorry! Really appreciate you reading, thanks so much! Very happy that you saw them on the right path at the end. <333
That was so incredibly intense! Colin going method had me gasping, the encounter with the punter Stephen was such a bold move, I was...I was...yeah, just gaping and then B comes into it, and...jesus, mary and joseph. The tension! The raw hurt! THE FUCKING BRILLIANT WRITING THROUGHOUT!! It's official. I am dead as a dodo. *looks around* So, this is what brolin heaven looks like
Awww YOU. I'm sorry for the late response. Ruffle and I had a blast working on this together, so on her behalf as well as mine, THANK YOU!! It's awesome to know that you liked it and it struck such a cord with you. Thanks very much for reading! <3
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Bravo, my dears! This is amezzin'!! It hurt in all the right ways :D
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Thank you, from Ruffle and I, for reading, and I'm sure I speak for us both when I say we're thrilled you read this and liked it. Thanks. darling! <333
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*looks bashful* I love using icons to express myself. Call it the frustrated artist in me. I am not nearly as talented as I wish I was but my brain is vision rich so, yeah, the icons *loopy grin*
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I love this vivid description: There are so many bodies, so many people, all moving like the pulse of the place is alive inside them. Colin stands in the midst of it all, the noise and sweat, the music so loud that his teeth vibrate with it. Ultraviolet light filters down to the floor, where it’s all glowing eyes and bra straps, everything white is an iridescent underscore.
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Really appreciate you reading, thanks so much! Very happy that you saw them on the right path at the end. <333
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It's official. I am dead as a dodo.
*looks around*
So, this is what brolin heaven looks like
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