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Lip Service - The Panfandom Commentfest

Sep 15, 2015 21:01

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FILL (1/1) significantowl September 21 2015, 03:31:30 UTC

Erik's tongue is broad and warm, and he works it over Charles' chest with that characteristic single-mindedness Charles loves and despairs of in equal measure. Right now, all Erik's focus is on Charles' left nipple. The nubby texture of it, the slickness he's painted around it, the burning heat of Charles' skin - the sensations flood Erik's brain, spill out into Charles', a tidal wave broaching a far shore. Eyes closed, jaw's hinged open, Erik's tongue drags in slow, lapping strokes that have long since been outpaced by the pounding of Charles's blood.

He knows Erik can feel that, the pulsing of iron in his veins. He knows Erik's aware he's ready for more, he needs more, but as ever, even when they agree on the ends, Erik pursues them according to means of his own choosing ( ... )

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RE: Re: FILL (1/1) significantowl September 22 2015, 16:04:21 UTC

Yaaaay thank you! So glad you enjoyed! (THESE TWO, I SWEAR)

Re: FILL (1/1) redconverse September 21 2015, 10:41:26 UTC

HGGNNNGNNGGNNGHHHH. You never, ever fail to stun me with how evocative and sensual and visceral your writing is. I adore this, as ever. Thanks so much for posting it, and god OF COURSE the worst way to get Erik to hurry up is by asking. :D

RE: Re: FILL (1/1) significantowl September 22 2015, 16:24:42 UTC

BEAMING, thank you!! <3 (Haha right? oh Erik.)

Re: FILL (1/1) alby_mangroves September 21 2015, 11:30:45 UTC

OH. MYGOD. Unbelievably hot and I just adore that detailed kind of UST where it's happening but at a pace that's more conducive to driving Charles insane rather than getting him off. SO GOOD. <3 Thank you so much!!

Re: FILL (1/1) significantowl September 22 2015, 21:19:51 UTC

*flail* So glad you liked it, friend! Thank YOU for the prompt! (And omg me too. Me tooooooo.)

Re: FILL (1/1) alba17 September 22 2015, 14:46:00 UTC

hgnidgdk Awesome. I love the way you bring their personalities into it. Beautiful.

Re: FILL (1/1) significantowl September 22 2015, 21:21:51 UTC

\\o// So glad you liked it! Thank you!! <3

Re: FILL (1/1) capricornucopia September 26 2015, 01:06:31 UTC

the pulsing of iron in his veins

I loved this line! It makes one think of all the things Erik can sense and how much more sensory his experience is this way (and of Charles in his way as well). :DDD

Erik pursues them according to means of his own choosing.

SO PERFECTLY ERIK. <333

Re: FILL (1/1) significantowl September 27 2015, 22:27:01 UTC

THANK YOU LOVELY ♥ ♥

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