Comments | albumsontheside: fic: all our yesterdays [anakin, padmé, pre-rots]

albumsontheside

fic: all our yesterdays [anakin, padmé, pre-rots]

Dec 22, 2009 23:19

This was inspired by the best fic ever, aka yenneffer and her birthday fic for me. Go read it, nowwwwwww!

Title: all our yesterdays
Author: albumsontheside
Characters: Anakin Skywalker, Padmé Amidala
Timeline: pre-ROTS
Word Count: 200
Summary: Regret is a shroud, translucent and pale, binding their corpses stiff in a parody of fidelity.

( 'Don’t you think, Anakin, that we shouldn’t have to do it like this? At all?' )

!fic, star wars

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albumsontheside December 23 2009, 11:18:11 UTC

Thanks gorgeous -- how are you? It feels like we haven't spoken in agesssssss :D

starfoozle December 22 2009, 23:54:15 UTC

Oh, gorgeous, but heartbreakingly so.

albumsontheside December 23 2009, 11:19:01 UTC

Thank yoooou, my love <333333 How are you? (Your fb status made me LOL IRL, btw ;D)

Sweden must be lovely --- I have a friend in Finland who keeps inviting me there, but ... pronker December 23 2009, 00:11:18 UTC

I'm glad to see the 'living a lie' statement making an appearance, at least by implication, that yes, borrowing a bed and being so underhanded in one's relationship would eat away at their love. It's turned it to a nasty regret.

It's pretty, but rather boring. albumsontheside December 23 2009, 11:19:59 UTC

Yay, glad someone gets my attempt at A/P :D How are you, hun?

We've had snow and icicles here lately --- quite rare extremes. pronker December 23 2009, 14:38:39 UTC

Slogging away at polishing my elance profile and finishing up the last .002% of my Christmas gift offerings. Spouse is over halfway finished with his rad treatments!

Really? Where exactly are you? albumsontheside December 23 2009, 14:53:49 UTC

I'm so glad for your husband :D And good luck with the elance, bb, I bet you'll soon start getting some benefits from it :DDD

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archaeologist_d December 23 2009, 00:23:49 UTC

Really lovely. I loved your imagery - shroud, corpses, bloody lips and bittersweet. Almost like poetry!

albumsontheside December 23 2009, 11:20:44 UTC

Yeah, I love writing shortfic because you can write as little as you like and imply as much as you like :D How are you, hun?

archaeologist_d December 23 2009, 14:50:06 UTC

Doing well. Finished all my Christmas shopping. I'm trying to talk myself into writing again. I started working on both my WIPs and got side-tracked reading, instead.

albumsontheside December 23 2009, 14:54:31 UTC

*waves hand* You will start writing again.

Reading what? I'm reading Possession by AS Byatt atm and it's bloody brilliant :D

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chameleon_irony December 23 2009, 02:50:51 UTC

<3 This is a bit short, but very good! You've painted a very vivid and tragic picture.

for once, I did the unthinkable and actually wrote my own OTP

I'm shocked! Why do you call it your OTP if you (almost) never write it? I. Don't Get. It.

the best fic ever, aka yenneffer and her birthday fic for me

Agreed 100%. I'm predictable like that. ;)

yenneffer December 23 2009, 10:21:51 UTC

the best fic ever, aka yenneffer and her birthday fic for me

Agreed 100%. I'm predictable like that. ;)

I think if I was to get out now (and I am in minutes) the snow around me would melt from the heat in my face ;P

Thank you very much! It was my first Padme attempt, and you have no idea how happy I am that it worked :)
*hugs*

albumsontheside December 23 2009, 11:27:57 UTC

CLEARLY, YOU NEED TO WRITE PADME MORE OFTEN, THEN ;)

yenneffer December 27 2009, 20:54:45 UTC

Eee... Is that a moment when I'm supposed to be quiet and listen to my betters? ;P

I just got home, and my family had to un-glue me from the seat :/ Too long sitting in the car, at least that's a proffessional medical opinion of my brother (who, incidentally, studies Maths&Physics, and not medicine)

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