challenge fic: hidden advances [han, leia, esb, 1sentence]

Apr 12, 2009 18:38

Title: Hidden Advances
For: 1sentence challenge.( Han/Leia, ESB, ~1000 words )

!fic, star wars

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archaeologist_d April 12 2009, 18:57:55 UTC
Well done. Loved the way the prompts pulled me along in the story. Great job.

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albumsontheside April 12 2009, 19:03:45 UTC
Thank you!

btw, I am trying my hand at some Merlin icons. Your thoughts?


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archaeologist_d April 12 2009, 19:17:09 UTC
Ah, the hat! I think I like the middle one best just because the feathers are so awful that they need to be showcased. Perhaps with a bit of text at the bottom left?

Glad to see that you are still enjoying Merlin!

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albumsontheside April 12 2009, 19:18:27 UTC
Hmm ... I seem to be awfully allergic to text and textures, but I'll give it a spin.

I LOVED that hat. I ... I WANT that hat.

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alpaca4eva April 12 2009, 19:02:59 UTC
Amazing. I don't know how you managed to incorporate all the themes and still make it into a coherent story. I imagine it took a while.

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albumsontheside April 12 2009, 19:04:30 UTC
Yeah, it took about 20 mins once I got started. I didn't really know how to begin it due to the fact that my OT muse had, like, DIED, but after I wrote one or two sentences, it just got going :D

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alpaca4eva April 12 2009, 19:30:08 UTC
I would've thought that it would have taken longer than that. Maybe I just write really slow. XD

I like the middle icon up there best, too. Nice crop.

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albumsontheside April 12 2009, 19:33:37 UTC
Naah, I just tend to write loads very quickly, then spend hours obsessively editing it. The drabble I wrote on the Jedi in my last post was there for /three days/ before I was satisfied with one word choice. I am very picky when I write.

Here is same icon with texture&text. Better? Worse? I don't like textures etc, they never look right on my icons.


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minimorr April 12 2009, 21:02:38 UTC
Really not my fandom or anything, stumbled over it by chance and just wanted to comment that this was very, very well done. I really liked how you begun and ended the sentences so smoothly, still managing to keep to the 1 sentence theme and yet tell a whole story while doing it.

Thank you very much for sharing! :)

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albumsontheside April 12 2009, 21:05:58 UTC
Hey, thanks! I'm glad you liked and commented even if you're not into the GFFA. If you liked my take on 1sentence fics, I did another one here: http://albumsontheside.livejournal.com/17976.html Warning for NC-17 :)

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albumsontheside April 12 2009, 21:18:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :D

I did another Han/Leia 1sentence thing here: http://albumsontheside.livejournal.com/17976.html if you're interested. Warning for smut.

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lazypadawan April 12 2009, 22:12:08 UTC
Very nice! I'm always happy to see fan fic writers who can faithfully write a variety of characters and situations.

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albumsontheside April 12 2009, 22:12:45 UTC
Yay, thank you! Glad you likes :D

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