Title: Dust Man.
Characters: Eden/Sylar
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 1,493
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: He always comes to visit at her call.
Note: Gift!fic for Dana! You said make up sex and it sort of is. Slightly LA!Eden in this. I hope you like :)
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Make up for the wait... )
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Thank you!
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I'll try but you know Saya/Maybriel owns me for now, there's so much to write about :x
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Now on to less flaily things:
But sometimes she sees him rise a hand to push up none existence glasses and shows shock and sadness that he has none, she sees that his transformation is not as complete as hers. She’s on her third now…
I love this, Gabriel still shining through from time to time while her transformation was complete. LOL. And you have no idea how close this is to one of the stories I had to read for school :D
He loved her doing this to him, he was to vain to ignore the autoerotic delight of seeing himself pleasured by another.
OH HELL YES!
Oh honey this was hot and just the thing I needed! Thank you so much!
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He was Gabriel for so long, that just doesn't go away. Or more accurately he can't push that back. And suddenly not wearing glasses is weird :P What story is that?
*teeeheee* I think he'd be a fan of that ;)
*hugs* my pleasure hun :D
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It's the Metamorphoses by Ovidius, but then a newer version (it was my exam question by the way)
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GUH! oh Eden used voice.
OMGoodnessTammy! O_o
he leans back, fingers curled around his belt so that his jeans gape open. “So you‘re completely chaste when gone from me?”
“Practically asexual.” His expression says otherwise, as does the bulge in his pants. He reaches for her hand and curls her fingers towards her palm and then lifts it to his mouth. His lips press firmly to her knuckles and he looks at her over them.
I love that. I couldn't stay away. :-\
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She did, that's why she's more like morally loose LA!Eden.
Thank you!! I had this picture in my head of Eden still living in that isolated farm house but no one knowing she's got all this power.
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I think I've ended it and now I just need to go back and clean it up.
I DON'T WANT TO GO TO WORK!
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woohoo! Can't wait to read it again ;) I'm writing that KW smutty thing you wanted, him in her dreams :x
BUT YOU WANT TO BE PAID YUS? :P
Sexy icon btw.
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Ooh Tam this was great! I love the tension between the two. Eden is on her third transformation and she realizes Gabriel is still on his way. She doesn't understand how dangerous he is, though. He's possessive and feral, but she doesn't know he's a killer too, and that's where the tension comes from: will he kill her if he finds out about her voice? Oh wow....
I want fluff nao. LOL :D
ETA: er so I re-read your comment, I guess he already knows about her voice. *facepalm* BUt yeah. DANGER EDEN, DANGER!! I like that she uses her voice on him. Very Morally Grey. w00t.
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Thank you!! *nods* she gets he's dangerous but she doesn't know just how much. He came for her power the first time, she knows that but she doesn't know what he planned to do (and she kinda doesn't want to know, she's lonely and so is he. He likes that she doesn’t know. It works for them)
I can't think of fluff Gabden at the moment...
Thanks for reading! :D
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Guh ! That was HOT XD
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Thanks! :D
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