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[albion1919]

Title: Sundress

Characters: Gabriel/Maya

Rating: NC-17

Word count: 2,400

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: She wants some sun.

Note: Smut, nothing more or less :D

She stands luminous in the sunshine, her bare feet padding through the grass as she methodically waters the flowers with a hose. She straightens, kneading her back and the water glitters in the

Comments

[herm_weasley]

Awwwwwwwwwww. They're so suit! Wish I could picture them this way too! I'm terrible with AU things or non-canon stuff ://
But this is lovely! <333

[albion1919]

Thanks! AU land is fantastic and I love writing in it. Canon Saya is depressing and sad, I like him to actually have emotionally depth and feel conflicted, not evilly smirking at her when she's not looking. Gives you more to work with you know?

[fifmeister]

HOT.

Okay, now let me try for something more coherent. :p

I looooved the bit with the ice cream. I don't know what it is, but there's just something awesome about fics with ice cream almost-foreplay. ;) And for some reason it was SO HOT when he growled at the condom, LOL.

I loved that they had sex against the chest of drawers instead of in the bed, haha. ;) And it was so cute how they were trying to keep it down but not really succeeding--I bet Alejandro was downstairs shaking his head and muttering. :p

The tenderness at the end was lovely. :) Nice job!

[albion1919]

LOL!

*nods* I think it's erotic and rather sweet, sharing food as fore-play. He doesn't like them, lol! I love growly Gabe :x

I was trying to use different places then the bed, lol! Heehee, poor Ale I don't think he'd like anyone who went out with Maya.

Thank you, I love that about her, she is affectionate.

[razycrandomgirl]

never in my life have I ever wanted Alejandro to be less in a story. I was shouting when he asked for help with the groceries.

COCK BLOCKER! LMAO!

[albion1919]

LOL! muahahahahah!

Can you imagine what it must have been like in the car for those two+ weeks? Torture! :P

[razycrandomgirl]

*turns into a creepy mouth breather*

MY SWEET GOD GUH!

that was the best ever.

I wanna be a perv and bookmark this

dude ... you are the mistress of "fluff" lol :)

[albion1919]

HEEEE!

I'm happy you liked it! lol you can if you want, perv away :P

*blushes* ta, a bit of "smuff" is nice ;)

[razycrandomgirl]

Smuff ... for the mutha fuckin win! hehehem

[albion1919]

\o/ you got that right! ;)

[albion1919]

THANK YOU! Rough Gabe is guh :x

[dana_serenity]

Oooh this was so damn hot! <3

[albion1919]

Oh thank you! I serve to please :P