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[albion1919]

Title: Girlfriend.

Characters: Gabriel/Eden.

Rating: R.

Word count: 1,931

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: AU. Eden is a callgirl in this fic and Gabriel her "client"

Note: There will be more at some point. This was going to be in 1st person but it didn't flow after the opening. Eden doesn't have an ability. Beginning inspired by an unposted story by sinemoras

Comments

[albion1919]

Muahahahah! XD

It did not suck! Ohh I still want you to post it! And to be honest I'm in two minds if I should make it as dark as that, I could I guess.

Thank you :D

[bellonablack]

Just a drive-by, but god. Holy...god. I can see this happening. Absolutely. I hope you continue this, it's a stroke of genius, and just fits so well. In this, I felt sorry for Gabriel. Honestly...I maybe won't by the end, but yeah.

-BB

[albion1919]

*flials* Thank you!! I will continue it, just got to get these essays done first lol :) :)

[force_oblique]

Aww that was awesome and I loved the way you described everything like both of their reactions to each other!
Adorable!!
There will be another part, right?

[albion1919]

Thank you!! I'm trying to be more descriptive :x

Yep, a few more (obviously have to explain the beginning)

[razycrandomgirl]

“Yeah my whole apartment is kinda strange…” He grins, knowing that it was the wrong moment to do so a second later and settles his face still again. But she returns it, dimples appearing in each cheek and he feels the need to press a fingertip on the creases.

she must think his gay. too cute he is!

[albion1919]

Erm, why? Cute and slghtly oddball was what I was going for, not "I'm not attracted" :x

She thinks he's very socially awkward and withdrawn but she's used to men like him, being a call girl. And the look he gives her at the end has given her pause for thought.

[razycrandomgirl]

Awwww I just thought she might have thought he was putting on a show for his mom and the people at the reunion.

And the look he gives her at the end has given her pause for thought.

cause he wants her soooo badly.

[albion1919]

Nope, she just thought he was shy :)

Yus and this will become more apparent ;)

[dana_serenity]

Oh this is so very interesting!

I can't wait for more!

[albion1919]

Thank you! I've almost finshed the next part!

ADIPOSE FTW! :P

[dana_serenity]

Yay!

OMG yours is so much cuter!! I can steal?

[albion1919]

\o/

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