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[albion1919]

Title: Testimonies.

Characters: Maya and a few OC (mentions of Sylar)

Rating: R

Word count: 2, 363

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: Different accounts of a shooting.

Note: This is something new for me. Very AU. I hope it's alright :\

The body lies spread eagled on the sidewalk, her brightly coloured clothes, Canary yellow and Madonna blue, in stark

Comments

[razycrandomgirl]

GOLD STAR!!! aww man

I figured it out 2/3rds or so in (maybe 3/4ths)

Poor Maya. :(

Quick Sylar go get the magic blood!

[albion1919]

Thank you!! *takes star*

Well I was worried that it was obvious so I'm happy with that :)

I know we were all getting sick of Maya dieing in fic but I had this idea for awhile.

LOL! I thought that but in this AU the blood didn't work...

[razycrandomgirl]

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! WhatTheHell LJ! I didn't get this message.

it's not too bad cause it tricks you into thinking it was Sylar/Gabe, but ...

this could have been an Law and Order cross over.:x lol

I feel bad for Lina, Gabe and Maya.

fluff now? peese *puppy face*

[albion1919]

LJ isn't sending me them either! *shakesfist*

That was the effect I wanted to create :)

I've watched that but I know what you mean :P

It sucks for everyone (It's Sylar in this fic, not Gabriel :) )

I'll think of something :D

[dream_infinity0]

this is a differnet story line...i think i had to read it two times to get it...

it was very good. poor maya thro...feel bad for her.

great work :)

[albion1919]

Sorry if it wasn't clear the first time :)

Thank you! Me to but she does have huge list of the dead attached to her that had families grieving for them (I guess).

:D

[gimmemypickle]

Wow. Just wow. This was really wonderfully done. It felt so real. I like how you've explored the different accounts and how different but alike all of their perceptions of the crime are. And how it seemed like one thing but ended up being something completely different and even more heartbreaking.

Hon, I think this is the most amazing fic ever. Completely brilliant.

[albion1919]

YAY!! Thank you, I'm really happy that you liked it! I was struggling with it for awhile, I knew what I wanted to happen but I only decided on the different testimonies right as I started writing.

*blushes* Thank you again :D :D

[albion1919]

(LJ is being so crap!)

Wow! Thank you, I wrote all of it last night, rushed it so I wasn't feeling 100%. So I'm relieved that you like it :D

I'm with you on the present tense. I was half way through writing the smut in past tense and it was obvious that present was just more effective.

Thanks again m'dear :D

[albion1919]

I'm all happy face and blushing LOL! Thank you again! :D :D

I want to try different styles. Like I was telling Cana that writing in the 1st person was really an interesting thing to do. I want to do it again.

[fifmeister]

This is flat-out fabulous! I love the idea, and the way you added in all the different testimonies in all the different voices. I could practically envision them all in my head, just from the way you wrote their dialogue. And I think it's so awesome that you explored the emotions of a family member of one of the many victims--something that never seems to happen on the show

[albion1919]

LOL! ;)

[fifmeister]

*snicker* Of course! How could I not have thought of that? *smacks forehead* :p