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[albion1919]

Title: Fate. Part Two, complete.

Characters: Maya/Sylar

Rating: NC-17

Word count: 2, 570

Disclaimer: Do not own.

Summery: What *might* have happened as they waited for Suresh to get home.

Note: SMUT! Lots of smut, long and smutty. You get it ;)

Parts:  1, 2

They manoeuvre into the spacious bathroom, not seeing where they are going as they are consumed in

Comments

[albion1919]

HEEHEEEEEEEE!! I haven't written smut that long or got it down as smoothly in ages.

Thank you chick! She does have a bit of an O face when she's got the black eyes :X *teehee* I totally got the idea of the multi orgasm/IA from your Gabden fic!well that is Gabe at the end of the day, as odd as it sounds he was quite gentlemanly on the show. Aside from the heated glances and touching he waited for her to kiss him...

*gives you towel*

[sarahetc]

Good gawd! So wonderful! And you leave it on such an up note-- even knowing what happens next. It makes it INCREDIBLY compelling.

the sight of his penis in her hand at once deeply erotic and very strange

Excellent imagery, to capture just that moment

“Keep my hair up.”

I caught on fire.

He could never be sure if it was the trick of the light but her eyes that flutter open become lighter, the whites ringed black.

Beautiful detail!

Fantastic! I really, really enjoyed this!

[albion1919]

Thank you so much! Yep, up note. Saya doesn't have to be all doom and gloom XD

*happy dance* I'm really glad that you did!! :D

[fifmeister]

*falls off chair*

*shakes head* I honestly don't know how you do it. This is so... *fans self* I think "OMG WOW excuse me while I sprint for a nice cold shower!" pretty much sums it up. :p

Okay, Sylar? Has the best power in the world. Ever. I know I've said "IA FTW" a hundred times, but I'm saying it again: IA for the WINNNN! *grin*

His sheer possessiveness of her is so hot and so creepy at the same time! And guhhhh, the part where he was holding up her hair and breathing into it all heavily I was just like *dead*

he watches her carefully, transfixed...He moves closer, hand on her cheek. “Ok? Ok?”

OMG I loved that part...just the mental image of him staring at her so intensely while he's touching her. Guhhh. And I loved his eagerness when he was making her come the second time. *fans self repeatedly*

Her knees buckle and he sinks down with her, leaning over her back as Maya comes again, her hands gripping the edge of the bath tub tightly as her body bucks and her hips pump.That part to me was SO HOT for some reason. Like really

[albion1919]

YAY!!!! If you're running for a cold shower then my work here is done XD

Dude I think I should put "IA FTW" on an icon, it deserves it I think...

I've always loved the possession angle of his character, it's creepy but mmmmmmm.

Oh noes! Beth think! *throws water over you* :P

Thank you! Seriously I'm a serial nitpicker, give me a line of dialog/looks that gets my interest up then I'll hold on to it.

Oh yeah, the babysitter comes back and throws them out and they go find a hotel XD

[fifmeister]

And you do your work so very well! ;)

Oooh, that's an awesome icon idea! *nods* I have a question about the IA, though: in this fic, are you going with ZQ's interpretation that IA isn't a power, but just a highly developed skill? Because if it were a power, then he wouldn't be able to use it since he was still virus-stricken at that point.

*nods* I enjoy it, too. It's deliciously creepy, really. :p But at the same time it's not just sheer creepiness for the sake of creepiness. If that makes any sense. :p

Eeep! *is splashed* That was helpful, thank you. ;)

FTW! XD

[albion1919]

Thank you XD

I'm going with ZQ interpretation in this, lol, I'll have to :P

I see. Like it's creepy because it's him but he'd not just feeling that way because he's all "mauahhaha." He wants her.

Welcome :)

Teehee!

[ebee223]

foof.

wow.

i am feeling so incredibly jealous of maya right now. ;)

[albion1919]

Teehee! Oh yeah, his power really does have many uses ;)

[razycrandomgirl]

"OMG Becky"

Hot with the blow job ... but the thing with the hair remins me of something Dane cook said. lol Sorry.

*contues to read*
=-o she spit. sorry *giggles*

“Ok? Ok?”
“Uhh, si. God please make it happen. Please, please, please.”
“I will, I will.”

*pants* OMG =-o I did not miss that.

*reads more*

*whimper*

*dies*

*whimper*

*dies*

Fate phew!

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":ADG":KGLKAG:LJ

[albion1919]

Nope, the Dane Cook joke is lost on me.

*tuts* Cana, some discretion... :x

Still alive yeah? XD XD

[razycrandomgirl]

I'm here *flails hands*

heres a link to it.