Kept Woman WIP

[albion1919]

So here's the KW stuff. Unbet'd.

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[razycrandomgirl]

Weee can't wait to lock myself away and read this! :D

[albion1919]

Hope you like 'em. Sorry if there's any typos.

[razycrandomgirl]

I really love the image of him bouncing her on his lap. :X I really love the image of her sitting on his lap ... or laying on him Etc. etc!

And her throwing him to the 'wolves'. That is too amusing. :D

Shout outs to Rene!! \o/

She had felt this once, before. When she found out about her brother.

O_O wow she went back to get help for a suicidal man who can't die. That's amusing. *shakes head* And frustrating! Was Elle looking for him?

[albion1919]

I like to think the were at intimate as possible when they were alone :-*

lol she didn't knew at that point he couldn't die. Nah, she was making a lighting show that Maya saw.

Thank you for reading all this *squish*

[razycrandomgirl]

thank you for posting it!

I liked that Catlin wasn't waiting around for Peter. Did you see the line where Maya did have that thought that someone would come for her? But then she made up her mind that that time has past.

I know that must have been frustrating for Maya and I wonder what it was like when she went back. It's like "I came back for nothing!"

So Elle was on one road and Adan was on another? Poor Maya can't catch a break.

Well it makes me think of Dania and Zach laying on that bench. I wonder how it got to that. "lets take a picture over here on this bench. Lie back!"

LOL Wut!?

[albion1919]

Yeah Caitlin stroke me as someone that wouldn't do that. I think Maya was expecting rescue at first. Which makes sense because why would they leave them there alone? She didn't know that Maury was doing his mind whammy around Odessa. And they thought she and Sylar were dead.

lol she knew that was some bad mojo on those roads.

"I'm sleepy, ima going to sleep."

"me to!" *Dania lies on him like a bed*