Comments | albion1919: Heirloom

albion1919

Heirloom

Aug 09, 2009 16:05

Title: Heirloom
Characters/Pairing: Gwen/Arthur
Rating: PG
Word count: 767
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: He gives her a gift that she can't bring herself to keep. Yup.
Note: For gimmemypickle. Sorry it's taken awhile and sorry it's not that long.

( She moves forward, avoiding his eyes and gently sets the triskle down )

fic: heirloom, arthur/gwen, gift!fic, merlin

Comments 21

kepp0xy August 9 2009, 18:47:21 UTC

Ah, I enjoyed this! For some inexplicable reason, I love the idea of Gwen sneaking into his rooms while he sleeps to return it. :]!

albion1919 August 9 2009, 18:56:37 UTC

Thank you! She's reduced to sneaking lol, otherwise it would be a back and forth "yes-no-yes-no." Though it would look a little suspect if anyone saw her coming out his room in the morning ;)

dfriendly August 9 2009, 19:48:07 UTC

I agree with kepp0xy. It's both Gwen being in his room while he's sleeping and him waking up to her in his room. "His mouth curls into a sleepy smile when he sees her"

albion1919 August 9 2009, 20:12:07 UTC

Thanks! It's happened more then once so he expects to see her if he gives it back. And he's sneaking into her house to lol :)

gimmemypickle August 9 2009, 20:13:55 UTC

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

I adore this so much that I had to pull out the sparkly & big text. :D

This is how it should begin on the show! It's so easy to see Arthur trying to court her subtly by giving her such a precious gift & Guinevere being oblivious about it all & reluctant to accept it. *crazed flailing*

IT'S SO LOVELY AND ORIGINAL! THANK YOU, TAMMY! <3<3<3<3<3

albion1919 August 9 2009, 20:32:03 UTC

YAY SPARKLES!!

lol I don't think she's that oblivious, though I don’t think she sees that he’s doing it to get her to come to him alone. If she says Arthur gave it to her people might think he's giving her a bit more of something else *nudge wink*

I'm glad you liked it! I had like two other ideas half written but I couldn't finish them. *huggles*

Rachel says I must read this. razycrandomgirl August 10 2009, 01:29:05 UTC

This was sweet. I like the way you describe him waking up to her. :D

And then him getting all intense stare at the end. :D

Every good, Tammy (as always)

Re: Rachel says I must read this. albion1919 August 10 2009, 06:49:54 UTC

Aww thanks for reading this, I know you haven't watched it :)

Ta ^_^

Re: Rachel says I must read this. razycrandomgirl August 10 2009, 12:58:25 UTC

It's still very sweet. You painted a very vivid picture. :D

Re: Rachel says I must read this. albion1919 August 10 2009, 15:14:19 UTC

Thank you! ( I hope you watch it one day, it's fun)

Some KW next I think, might have Peter in it...

Thread 5

work in progress crayford August 10 2009, 18:46:57 UTC

Will be typing a comment when I can be bothered to use my brain.

Re: work in progress albion1919 August 10 2009, 18:57:24 UTC

lol ok :)