Comments | albion1919: Good Impressions

albion1919

Good Impressions

Jun 01, 2009 22:35

Title: Good Impressions
Characters/Pairing: Gabriel/Eden, Virginia
Rating: R
Word count: 2,570
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: Bedtime is interrupted. Bit of fluff, bit of angst, bit of almost smut ;)
Note: Just domestic Gabden. Wrote this awhile ago but couldn't finish, back when my brain was all feck you bitch I'm exhausted.
Ah, yeah. Better now :)

( Well at least I know the first thing you're rescuing in a fire... )

fic: good impressions, fluuufffff, gabden, virginia, heroes

Comments 8

sarahetc June 2 2009, 00:11:04 UTC

Good for Eden! Well done! Pepper spray and a rousing speech indeed.

albion1919 June 2 2009, 09:44:54 UTC

She'd be a great motivational speaker ;)

sinemoras09 June 2 2009, 03:25:53 UTC

Oooh! Gabden! I've missed it! :D

I could totally see Virginia lying about being robbed. It totally fits her character. *nods* Poor Eden. I hope she finally lets him in....

Well done! :D

albion1919 June 2 2009, 09:48:49 UTC

lol I wrote some for that anon rare pairing meme, there was only one person asking for that pairing.

I can see her doing all sorts of stuff like that to get his attention. Gabe and Eden are in the same boat, some things they probably won't ever reveal for fear it will drive the other away. But you can’t hide stuff forever ;)

fifmeister June 2 2009, 21:41:52 UTC

Aww, domestic fluff! *sigh* Always did have a weakness for it. ;) I liked the use of the hymn, and like Ann said, Virginia making any excuse to see Gabe was totally in character. Nice job!

albion1919 June 2 2009, 21:47:46 UTC

Ta! For me domestic and this ship just click for me, that and fluff :)

Virginia is an interesting one, so messed up. I wonder if anyone has done a fic about her growing up, how she became like that.

Thanks again! :D

lemomina July 6 2009, 01:50:20 UTC

I read this when it was posted ( it was my 1st Gabriel / Eden fic ) and i totally forgot to comment .

Anywho , i like how Eden handled the whole situation with Virgina ( the poor lonely woman )
And the Smut or the almost smut in this case is Always a PLUS ;D

albion1919 July 6 2009, 08:48:45 UTC

Thanks for coming back to review lol

I think Eden would be good at that sort of thing, she's more a people person then either Gabe or his mum.

lol this would have been much longer if the smut was included ;)

Thanks for reading the fics! :D