La Llorona

[albion1919]

Title: La Llorona (The Weeping Woman)
Characters/Pairing: Sylar/Maya, Peter
Rating: R
Word count: 2,803
Disclaimer: Do not own.
Summery: Star signs can tell you a lot about a person
Note: The legend but with a twist. Maya POV for most of it.

Comments

[bellonablack]

Goodness this was a beautiful fic. XD

I love Cancers. :-)

I love the poetry of this, the moths...for gray. Omg. This made me cry, her pity for Elle on that beach...how tragic and sad. This was beautiful. :-)

[albion1919]

Thank you!!

I'm not really into horoscopes myself but I like the idea of it, my mum loves that stuff.

Well, she didn’t know Elle but she was sad that he had killed someone (but more relieved that she and her kids are alive and knowing that she's safe and can protect them and herself :x)

Aww don't cry *gives you a hug* Thank you again!

[anonymous]

Dude, guess who's at work right now surfing the internet (lurking your page)?

I'll read this when I get home ... (or at the library).

Back to work. :x

[albion1919]

ANON! :P

Aww ta! I enoyed writing this so I hope you do to :)

[razycrandomgirl]

Awww Peter got it right!

I really like this. :"( Maya got a make shift family (and look Uncle Peter!). Nice ref to Elle.

And he better say away. I'm glad it didn't go exactly like the legend.

Cheers!

[albion1919]

Well lets just say he's sharp at some thing :P

Thank you!! Shift family?

Yeah at first I thought I would keep it close to the legend, Maya accidentally killing them but as I was writing it didn't feel right.

:)

[razycrandomgirl]

I got afraid when it got to the part about them being in the water. D:

Gosh that would have been like a gut punch. Maya might have been ruined then. And then what would the lurker think (not that anyone should care about his feelings. Grrr to him.)

[albion1919]

Muaha I was sneaky ;)

Totally, she would have had to be hospitalised I think, with all that stress and grief etc. I felt sorry for him while I was writing it, I think because he actually does make a great parent, from what we've seen.

[albion1919]

Ta! I'm glad you like the quality to it, I was reading poetry beforehand so it influenced it. Losing a twin, especially if they're the only family you have, must be hell.

Nope she’s never mentioned again, Kring said that Peter's grief about her would derail the plot so they "leapfrogged over it." Aren’t they wonderful? *eye roll*

Maya really is lucky in a way. Awful things seem to happen to her frequently but she survives. Sylar said it's a big deal if he lets you live lol.

[razycrandomgirl]

Kring said that Peter's grief about her would derail the plot so they "leapfrogged over it." Aren’t they wonderful? *eye roll*
*snort* that's what made me fall in love with Peter ...

[gimmemypickle]

Oh my goodness, this is just amazing!

[albion1919]

Woohoo thank you!! :D