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[albion1919]

Title: Cell.

Character: Eden/Sylar (sorta)

Word count: 1,281.

Disclaimer: Do not Own.

Rating: PG-13.

Summery: Eden's thoughts to herself as she changes the sleeping Sylar.

Note: Not really happy with it. Might be another chapter or not, depending how strong the smut call is XD...

Comments

[sinemoras09]

OWI!Sylar FTW!! \o/

I love how she sees herself in him, and I love how horrified she is when she realizes how much they have in common.

He had been eating one of her sandwiches, ones she had made for Chandra. She had spotted jam on the corner of his mouth and automatically brushed it off. That was the first time he had really taken any notice of her, thanking her sweetly…before catching her hand and sucking the digit into his mouth

OMG sandwiches! Jam! THUMB-SUCKING FOREPLAY S:DLFKJS:DLKFJSD:LKFJD.

If I were Eden I would have used my voice to shoo CHANDRA away and then find out where all that thumb-sucking would lead XD

I'm hoping for a part two. *dances*

[sinemoras09]

and how come you're not happy with it? I thought it was great!

[albion1919]

Thanks.I think because of the internal dialogue. Seems a bit barren with out anyone to play against. So to speak.

[sinemoras09]

Thanks.I think because of the internal dialogue. Seems a bit barren with out anyone to play against. So to speak.

It doesn't seem barren at all to me, but I know where you're coming from. When you're not happy with something, it's like, ugh, should I even put it *out there*?

But I think your piece is very well-written, so no worries! XD

[dream_infinity0]

me too I think there should be another chapter. Great writing

[albion1919]

I'll see what happens. Maybe a flash-back...

Thanks! :)

[ilovetbag24]

Sweetie, you freakin' rule!! I always look forward to your fics and you never cease to amaze me! I always find myself reading your fics in wonderment, the descriptions so clear I can see them in my head. Please tell me there's more to this story, preferably more with some smut!!

[albion1919]

Aww, thank you!! What are you writing next? Also how come you only write OFC? Is it just a preference?

There will be another part and *drum roll* smut! XD

[ilovetbag24]

I just finished writing a fic with lacrymosa_star and I'm about to start another one with her and then I'll write a continuation of "The Diary of Gray" and a me/Sylar D&S fic!! I don't know why I only do OFC, I guess I'm so used to bringing new characters into situations with Gabriel/Sylar. I've never tried to branch out and do Gaden, Mylar, or a Sylaire fic!

I'm so excited for some smut in your fic!! The whole part where Gabriel licked Eden's finger made me drool! God, he's hot!!

[albion1919]

I read some of the chapters for that, but not from the start, sorry. But I'll make sure that I'll read your new fic series! What's it about? :)

Well if the other ships don't interest you then stick with OFC. I'd like to give it a go one day. A platonic Sylar/OFC story I think...

Poor Eden, she's trying not to think on how hot he is and what he did to her. It messes up her resolve to kill him XD

[define_serenity]

Oh God this is so good!! Please please please tell me there'll be more?? Aha, I've already read the comments so don't answer that one:p but you have to at least expand on the sandwiches scene!! Pretty pretty please? Pretty please with a cherry on top??

She wet her fingers and dripped and then rubbed the water over his bottom lip.

Oh nice! No-one needs chapped Sylar lips...

With the buzz of the sheers echoing strangely in the cell, she shaved it off in clumps.

NOOOOOO! You don't mess with the hair!! You never mess with the hair!!

…before catching her hand and sucking the digit into his mouth,

Oh my, intense!! Not to mention scouldering HOT!!

[albion1919]

Thanks!! Yes, I will write the sandwich scene and what comes after! :D

NOOOOOO! You don't mess with the hair!! You never mess with the hair!!

Someone messed with the hair! He got pay-back at HRG for it though.

[define_serenity]

Woohoo *does happy dance* I can't wait to read :D no pressure intended

If I ever get my hands on the person who really did mess with his hair *grr* LOL I absolutely love that scene, I always cringe at the part where he pulls out the shunt because UGH! but then he goes 'that was for the haircut' and I crack up *lol* And it's the first time I really got a look at his feet too *swoons*

[albion1919]

I'll get writing now!

Oh that scene! My ovaries melted at the part where he takes the wallet and the camera is on his waist as he turns around. All long and lean *drools*

Man's got a gorgeous body shape!

[lacrymosa_star]

I LOVED IT!!! Deffinelty continue the story!

[albion1919]

THANK YOU!!! :)

Well there's another part. Don't know if I'll continue from there.