Comments | alasse_fae: New Fic: "A Fallen Leaf" (1/1)

alasse_fae

New Fic: "A Fallen Leaf" (1/1)

Dec 08, 2007 23:50

Title: A Fallen Leaf
Fandom: Robin Hood (BBC)
Pairing: Guy/Marian
Rating: PG
Summary: Tag to 209 Tag means here there be spoilers. Proceed with caution.
a/n Unbeta'd and written quickly. I am still in nanowrimo withdrawal, apparently. And desperately waiting for this 210 torrent to finish...

( And I said let grief be a fallen leaf, at the dawning of the day. )

fic, robin hood

Comments 16

artemis_issoria December 9 2007, 10:13:45 UTC

This is so wonderfully written and very clever. You've managed to portray Marian's conflicted feelings and her attraction to Guy, as well as Guy's blind devotion when it comes to Marian. I like how Allan compared Marian to himself! I LOVED it and I'm adding it to my memories right away!!

alasse_fae December 9 2007, 19:30:48 UTC

Thanks :D Glad you liked it! Our boy is rather blind, isn't he, poor thing.

iwillrememberu December 9 2007, 12:28:19 UTC

That? Was really good. I really loved how you had Allan in between trying to make her see what she was doing.

Loved it :)

alasse_fae December 9 2007, 19:28:01 UTC

Thanks :) I feel bad for Allan getting that bad rap considering what Marian is doing to our poor Guy.

iwillrememberu December 9 2007, 20:14:32 UTC

I know. I love that we get any Guy/Marian but I hate the manipulative behavior.

boy_named_susie December 9 2007, 19:48:08 UTC

I really liked this. Well done.

alasse_fae December 9 2007, 19:51:41 UTC

Thanks! :)

bj_4ever December 9 2007, 22:05:25 UTC

"I am not like Allan, I am not."
Are you trying to convince yourself my lady?? lol

Well done :D

alasse_fae December 10 2007, 01:02:57 UTC

Perhaps she doth protest too much? ;)
Thanks!

soft_creations December 9 2007, 22:14:02 UTC

*sigh* well done very well written. I especially loved the Marian/Allan comparison.

alasse_fae December 10 2007, 01:07:03 UTC

thanks! :)