Lord and a Lady

Oct 04, 2009 23:59

Title: Lord and a Lady
Characters/Pairing: Arthur/Gwen
Spoilers: 1x10
Word Count: uh, around 2,000?
Disclaimer: I own zilch.
Summary: Guinevere takes a late night walk in the forest, and runs into Prince Arthur. Set just after 1x10.
Author’s Note: This is the first thing I’ve written in about a year so please be gentle on me! The mood is a bit all ( Read more... )

fic: merlin, fic: arthur/gwen

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Comments 27

aamo October 5 2009, 09:12:30 UTC
I like your writing style. And Arthur's mean streak/subsequent guilt should definitely be explored more.

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alas_agnes October 5 2009, 12:25:11 UTC
yeah, arthur can be a bit of a bastard at times (2x01 anyone?). thanks for dropping by!

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shootingstars88 October 5 2009, 16:56:52 UTC
This is absolutely brilliant. A wonderful look at the beginnings of a shift between Arthur/Gwen and how they might react to such subtle changes. Wonderful. And that last line from Gwen made me laugh :)

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alas_agnes October 7 2009, 17:16:18 UTC
Yeah, 1x10 was where it all shifted for them wasn't it? Thanks for the comment! x

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starry_laa October 5 2009, 17:59:19 UTC
Wonderful interaction between the two. I loved the analogies and also the 'politics' involved. That was really well written!

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alas_agnes October 7 2009, 17:15:30 UTC
Cheers. I didn't want them to get too chummy because, well, they're not chums and he's royalty etc. Thanks for the comment!

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fireblazie October 6 2009, 02:01:25 UTC
Oh, I LOVE the banter between these two and how they were *totally* flirting, hee. The ending line was great.

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alas_agnes October 7 2009, 17:14:48 UTC
Thanks for the comment! :)

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9tiptoes October 6 2009, 03:14:21 UTC
Guinevere. He is too proper to call a woman her nickname - Gwen - so he must find his way around the complicated, difficult syllables of her full name.

Oh, that is it exactly!! I've never heard it described so well. finding his way around the syllables of her name. Oh, I LIKE that!

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alas_agnes October 7 2009, 17:14:11 UTC
Guinevere is a long-ass name, isn't it? Thanks for dropping by!

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