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alanna_smithee

Ascension Part 1

Jan 23, 2008 02:27

Title: Ascension Part 1 ( Read more... )

Comments 14

serpentine_moon January 23 2008, 02:43:52 UTC

vicki did the bdsm scene? yummy-yummy-yowza. and now mike and henry are going...really interesting. can't wait for chapter 2

alanna_smithee January 23 2008, 10:41:16 UTC

Sure she did. She would sooo fit! *g*

Thank you!

*Squeee* belovedbywar January 23 2008, 03:03:12 UTC

*Squeee* I can't wait for the next chapter!

Very nice so far, especially the way those two behave towards Vicky! I am actually wondering, if they can hold the peace for much longer. After all habits die hard and they never managed to keep their mouths shut, when not in immediate, mortal danger...

Thanks for sharing!

Re: *Squeee* alanna_smithee January 23 2008, 10:48:08 UTC

Thank you!

Oh, I'm thinking they can. And if they can't they'll just end up in bed to resolve all that UST. You know they will.

devohoneybee January 23 2008, 05:31:33 UTC

*grins* love Henry's outfit. *drool*

alanna_smithee January 23 2008, 10:48:30 UTC

Thank you! :)

sindee1982 January 23 2008, 05:47:39 UTC

Ok, first off: LOVE the "Mulder" comment--that cracked me up bigtime! Secondly, I like the direction this is going in--the whole antagonism H&M have going on with one another makes for some interesting chemistry down the line, which I'm GUESSING is where you wanna take this :) Thirdly, I love the whole dichotomy of H looking/appearing innocent: IMO that is the BEST type of predator, and again, makes for some interesting plot twists (not to mention humor; i.e. the whole beating them off with a stick line). Great job--would love to see the rest of this when it is done! Oh, and H's outfit at the club? TOTALLY HOT.

alanna_smithee January 23 2008, 17:31:18 UTC

Thank you! I had so much fun writing it, actually with the whole chapter, but especially with that comment. I can sooo imagine that.

Oh yeah, I love their antagonism. I don't know, why it appeals to me so much. Probably because I keep thinking, they are just covering up their UST.

Oh yes, that's exactly as I see it, too. Youth/innocence/beauty as a means to lure prey in. And I can totally see him playing with it.

sherron0 January 23 2008, 06:45:12 UTC

When the talking is this fun, talking is okay. I can actually see them, talking, despite the surroundings, caught up in their own little personal drama.

alanna_smithee January 23 2008, 17:32:18 UTC

Oh yeah, they get like that. Thank you for reviewing. :)