Fic Repost!

[alaceron]

Title: A journey of a thousand miles

Fandom: Iron Man

Summary: Pepper’s hair changes to suit the occasion. Tony notices.
Rating: PG-13 (or a very mild R)
Pairing: Tony/Pepper
Length: ~2,300
Disclaimer: Iron Man (and all related characters, etc.) belong to Marvel, etc.
Notes: Movie-verse, unbeta-ed.

In seven years, her hair will be unbound.
It will swing

Comments

[lizbet0]

This is absolutely beautiful! What a great idea, to tie all the changes in their lives to her hairstyles. Bravo! (Or "Brava!" - whichever's appropriate!) *applause* It was really intriguing to set it up from the future to the past.

I love back-and-forth on the outfits! Pepper knows how to pay him back, and as for Tony? Hey, it's win-win all around for him! *smirk*

I do miss a wedding vignette, though...*puppy dog eyes*

This is the loveliest line, though:

As he follows his wife to the bathroom, he will walk like a man who has everything.

Thank you, thank you!

[alaceron]

No, thankyou, my dear, for your wonderful feedback!

So happy that it made you happy!

(...would you believe, a wedding vignette never occurred to me. *facepalm* So we'll pin all our hopes on jezunya, shall we? >D)

And to be honest? That's kind of my favourite line too. ^^

[alaceron]

HELLO, MY DEAR, I HAVEN'T SEEN YOU IN A WHILE. =DDDD

I am AWESOMELY SURPRISED at you reading this! And I'm glad you liked it!

As for the dialogue thing (and the confusion), thanks for the heads-up! I shall keep that in mind next time. (And perhaps invest in a beta-reader. Ah, a beta-reader. I have heard of these wonderful things...)

♥ In any case, it's so nice to hear from you. Our plans to meet up seem to have fallen down the drain, but we should make NEW plans-- after my inflated face deflates, that is. (Wisdom teeth, the pesky things.)
(also, have you heard that Alex has gone on a tour to INDIA and EGYPT?)

[darksolez]

Wow, that was a fabulous fic! I like the 'hair theme', and I love how...sensual you've made it. There are some beautiful descriptions here, and I like how you're moving backwards in time rather than forwards. An extra touch of originality, there. My support of TonyxPepper increases again!

[alaceron]

Glad to be of service, fuelling your TonyxPepper love!

And I'm glad the style worked, too. Always a risk, are alternate formats of writing, and always a huge relief when they work (and when the style of writing doesn't lose people in the middle).

Thanks for taking the time to comment. :3

[manywaters]

I keep rereading this ever since I first found it. It's so wonderful. Thank you!

[naughty_gurrl]

This was absolutely beautiful.