Crit post

[al_for_one]

This post is for leaving crit and comments or asking questions!

Comments

[anonymous]

I've only read a few of your threads so far, but I have to say I love your Alain! You use the weird Midworld speech like you were brought up using it, and it's just a joy to read. ♥ Stoic characters can be hard to pull off and still make interesting, but I think you're doing a really good job with it. :D Keep up the good work!

[al_for_one]

Thankee sai anon! I cannot say how this pleases me to know I'm doing him justice. :D :D :D