Comments | akuro_tsuki: Black sun.

akuro_tsuki

Black sun.

Dec 04, 2006 13:48

People say one of my best .
Weird people XD
It's about 5 months old, was actually in German too and totally I failed at translating a few lines. *head desk*
( Black Sun )

language: english, !poem, !lyrics

Comments 19

bunny_of_mayu December 4 2006, 15:02:38 UTC

I love this one!!
"I can't tell you
What I am
Just what I'm not
I'm not strong, I'm not free, I'm not awake and not pure
I'm not even very smart
I'm not bad, but neither I'm good
I'm not a devil and neither an angel
I'm not with you
I'm not where I want to be
I'm not what people want me to
I'm may not yours
But neither I'm mine since long ago"
I feel of that way!...
Kaos piccu fits so good in it poem above all in the last sentence!!!

akuro_tsuki December 4 2006, 15:14:37 UTC

Hai, it's a good one :B But it sounds way better in German (especially the sentence I fucked up XD)
Thank you very much for your comments, dear. It makes me glad you like my stuff and that you feel something while reading it.
It's dedicated to him, so why shouldn't post a pic of him... he's all in my mind - I can't deny it.

bunny_of_mayu December 4 2006, 16:10:45 UTC

you really like to Kaoru^^

akuro_tsuki December 4 2006, 16:48:37 UTC

Like is expression for that XD
I'm obsessed and I reached the point where I don't care anymore what people think of it XD

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pi_ankh December 4 2006, 16:25:08 UTC

Nice one ^^

I can't tell you
Why my heart doesn't beat
And why I'm freezing
I'm not a master of surviving
That's my favorite part, I'm obsessed of this 'freezing' thing. I wrote many poems related to cold. [I guess it's from Rammstein's Keine Lust "So kalt, mir ist kalt" etc. I'm obsessed with that part ^^ (and oh dear lord how awful the lyrics looked like when they were translated to english...)]

akuro_tsuki December 4 2006, 16:54:08 UTC

Yeah, the freezing part things... I used that while ago very often too. I'm now over it I guess ^^; [Ah... that song is so funny and it's disgusting XD I always sang the song with my friend in school, people just stared at us XB But it's so typical Rammstein x)]

pi_ankh December 4 2006, 17:04:03 UTC

Well I find myself singing along 'Rein Raus' or 'Zwitter'... I don't think that Keine Lust is that bad XD
Mutter-album is all together perverted... At least I can find something twisted almost from every song :D

akuro_tsuki December 4 2006, 17:16:55 UTC

Rammstein is just the German Dir en grey XDDDDDD *cracks up laughing*
The have nasty, nasty stuff in their lyrics ^^; I really like the style of their music. It's dark and good and ass-kicking :D

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rag_doll_404 January 12 2007, 02:46:22 UTC

Your friend posted the link in one of my journal comments xDD, and I have to say that I like it =]
...the poem, that is XD

in_monochrome January 12 2007, 03:05:16 UTC

*giggles like hell*
akuro_tsuki is my writing LJ, dear! XDDD
And thanks! :D I'm glad you liked it~ x3

rag_doll_404 January 12 2007, 22:02:22 UTC

ROFL, I am so stupid XD!
Well I liked it, anyways XDDDDD